 king1234 2009-11-24 . chapter 47sorry i havent been reviewing just got out of the hospital from having surgery. this is a wonderful story and i would love for it to continue but if you dont want to continue it know that i am alright with that decision. i will continue reading your stories. i am also glad that you could find out that you can write a great story. have a great day/night and be safe. |
 anf600 2009-11-23 . chapter 47wow...well I read the story. I was in tears at some points. I wasn't too crazy about the milkyway boy or trucker stuff tho I understand it was a chance to pull together a lot of support and explain a lot of situations the others didn't see. Don't know the story anyone accused you of pulling stuff from - haven't read it at all. This was quite original. The end was quite abrupt and, so, a bit disappointing but I could understand it. I will have to check out some of your other fics. |
 Ryo19 2009-11-23 . chapter 47A brilliant, in depth and beautiful story that kept me waiting with baited breath for the next chapter while it was in progress.
Well done and thank you
I look forward to reading more of you work. Keep it up ;-) |
 Zuzanny 2009-11-23 . chapter 47that was very sweet. :) |
 Solitaire 2009-11-23 . chapter 47 Perfect ending. I will be looking forward to more of your works. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Blessings,
Solitaire |
 Kage Elric 2009-11-22 . chapter 47 I can't believe its done...i just can't believe it...ok lie, i can, but wow...its like an Era coming to an end, like Oprah's show coming to an end...I loved it though, that's what matters right? People loved it!! It was great, you're a fabulous writer and this was a great story.
btw, sorry i missed the last chapter, school's really killing me, anyway, I really loved this story it was just so real and not ridiculously optimistic like most others.
You really did a great job on this one, i must say some points could've been better, but no one perfect, and u came pretty damn close so it's all good.
Can't wait for the next one:D
Loved it, really...
JA |
 Anonymous Void 2009-11-22 . chapter 47Don't you dare take this story down. That's all I'm going to say on the subject.
Ah, I really liked the ending. Bittersweet and not everything is over and done with but it's as good as it'll get for now. So you got a bit sidetracked? Be careful about that in future stories, ya hear? |
 yuhukili 2009-11-22 . chapter 47I couldn't say it better than Kay already did. You couldn't have found a more fitting end than this.
I'm glad I started reading The Prodigal Brother. It more than once made my day when I found a new chapter and I will definitely miss looking for new ones.
Thank you for writing this story even though it wasn't always easy for you.
Best wishes from Tôkyô and I hope to read from you again!
yuhukili |
 Seithr-Kairy 2009-11-21 . chapter 47Hee~?? thanx for worry 'bout me. Just that I seemed to wander aimlessly this past months. I'm writing fanfic about a lesser known fandom right now, and rather preoccupied by it. Do you mind check it out for me for it's writing style?? it's ok if you didnt known the fandom, just checking whether or not I'm doing fine in writing a story please?? Thank you for attention!
Glad you reconsider about taken this down. Nice ending. I agree that sometimes it wasnt necessary to paired them up in 'that' kind. It was enough to just be beside them... (Grins)
Yay!! GW/SG-1! Huh? So the charas didnt possess you to write on their own? (Teased) Sometimes that could happen, ne??
Waiting your next story, jaa
_KH_ |
 Kay 2009-11-21 . chapter 47 I admit that I was sad to see the status of this story changed to "complete." (No more updates? But I so looked forward to them!) Having said that, I couldn't have asked for a more fitting ending. While I enjoyed the colorful characters that had cameos in the trial chapters, it seemed fitting that the story ended as it had begun: an intimiate study of the gundam pilots. It hurt to read about Duo's slow and incomplete recovery, but his struggles made his triumphs (however small) seem so much greater. He was bent until cracking. It would be unrealistic--and unfair to the story you created--for everything to magically be okay at the end. Instead, the honest, hesitant hope of the end was beautiful and fitting. Heero and Duo didn't automatically fall into each others' arms. Duo didn't immediately pick up where he had left off with the others. Life wasn't perfect. But they were together, and they were determined to try. It's a good hurt that you left us with.
Other notes: Loved, loved, loved Sally and Wufei's girls. The parts about their first words was a wonderful respite from the seriousness. "Daddy." Heh. I also loved the car ride home. Quatre and Duo's battle of the wills... I was holding my breath.
I can't tell you whether to leave this story up or take it down; you have to be comfortable with the decision. I can tell you that I was impressed with how you handled a difficult situation. I can also tell you that I am happy to have had the chance to read your work. |
 Peaceful Angel 2009-11-21 . chapter 47Oh Duo! I'm glad they group hugged him. I felt the urge to hug him too. Nice beating him into a corner by Trowa and Quatre, it was mean but in a caring way. Which is odd but works for Duo.
I love the part in Quatre's POV. It's so sweet and loving. Both for Duo and by Duo. Now I almost want to yell at Heero and Duo to get together, but at the same time I'm completely fine with them not getting together if they don't carry the same love for each other. If they do carry the same love well... Duo's learning to deal with life by the point in time of Quatre's POV enough that he mght run for a bit but he'd probably go back to Heero after working things out. |
 Milliefluff 2009-11-21 . chapter 47 Excellent, loved them taking care of him going home. Great Story! |
 padg 2009-11-21 . chapter 47 You should keep your story up. As for copying someones else's story have you looked at the story descriptions? It's a good story and should remain. |
 wind dancer1981 2009-11-21 . chapter 47I voted on the poll ^__~
and I hope to see another new amazing story by you soon ^__^
and knew that I am going to miss this story that its finished T_T |
 arialee 2009-11-21 . chapter 47awesome story! thanks for the update! and i hope you don't take the story down |