totally adorable

This was really good, a little short, but very very well done. You captured the child-like aspect very well.

Bravo!

cute sweetness

aw

A good thing to have, that could be taken with Rin and Sesshomaru too.

Oh boy, its that "Don't color in the books!" all over again, poor Sesshomaru has to go through it to, like all parents do.

So there Inuyasha! tee that was cute! Only a little child would take a statement like that literally.

I think this is an accurate explanation one could provide to a child. =)

I never pictured him as an artist, but I like the idea pretty much. And Rin, she is such a cute doll. I'd love to have a daughter like her. *g*
She cute improve my paintings as well... But in my case she should start with the drawing process. XD

Ah! Cute, adorable and unique... As always. ;)

Aw, these were adorable! I like that Sesshomaru was an 'artist' in the second one! Who would have thought, lol?

The first was adorable as well, and so cute how literally little Rin took Inuyasha's statement. (Child development experts agree that small children take EVERYTHING very literally, and don't understand sarcasm until about age 7, and metaphor until around 9-10yrs old, so it is very realistic as well!)

One thing, deary...

In this last chap you have the line: “Well, perhaps someone to watch them shine.”

Did you perchance mean 'Well, perhaps TO HAVE someone to watch them shine?'

Hearts and Hugs,
RS

YOU MADE ME CRY, WOMAN. <3 BAM. Succinct poignancy!

Great job, but i'm sad to see it ending.

Aww! *SQUISH* I just love this!! Yet another wonderful job, SS. This is the Sess/Rin I like. :)

Loved that!