OMG SO CUTE!

I disagree with the other reviewers, who say they couldn't see the Kirk/Bones development throughout the story. While it wasn't obvious, the smallest of hints were left to be found by those who were looking for them, and were implemented beautifully. I really adore the way you've written this, and how each segment has its own, unique flavour.

My favourite would have to be number two, since I absolutely loved how the three of them understood the dual meaning to the graduation day when no one else dared to. Gaila was a nice addition, and I really loved the idea with the scarf. As for the rest of them; every single part could stand alone by itself, but could also flowed like a full story. I really adored the ending, and you managed to bring one of my favourite pairings to life. Thanks so much for writing this - you have amazing talent and I can't wait to see more of your work.

Until next time. ;)

x

That was really cute!

This was great! I loved how they showed mourning at graduation; it was perfectly in-character.

You captured the emotions very well in each instance.

These were great snapshots! My favorite are the first 2. The ending of the fifth made me raise an eyebrow as there wasn't any implied slash between Jim and Bones in your scenes 2 and 4, but besides that 5 was nice and as beautifully written as the others :).

I thought that this was fairly written and that the snippets were fairly thought out (they didn't resemble other fics of the same theme too much and showed a little originality). However, the piece at the end with Bones seems awkward in comparison to the rest, as though it were tacked on. There didn't seem to be any development that would lead there and it comes out of the blue.

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! Funny, grief-filled, and of course, Kirk/McCoy...I love you!
-Nyx

D'aw. Lovely, bb. <3

can you put that its slash in the summary please? -_-

Great, thanks.