|Reviews for Magnum|
| QUACK3RS 5/1/13 . chapter 3
what a great read :) very exciting and suspenseful!
| P. Lambert-Jensen 1/18/13 . chapter 2
Once again, very impressive! In-depth and I love the flawless intergration you create with this very alternative genre and the factual NARUTO Shippuden plotline. It's brilliant!
| SomebodyLost 12/16/12 . chapter 3
Damn. That was... unexpectedly good. Very awesome. Will you make more?
| LS 10/26/12 . chapter 3
Beautiful ending. Interesting idea! I love AUs like this.
| LS 10/26/12 . chapter 2
I love your writing style.
| LS 10/26/12 . chapter 1
You are my very favourite writer on fan fiction, did you know?
| Guest 10/18/12 . chapter 3
You're an amazingly good writer...
Are you from Canada?
For some reason, all of the good writers on fanfiction are Canadians.
| Shubhs 6/6/12 . chapter 3
Interesting though it was quite idealistic as well.
| luvtoshi 9/20/11 . chapter 3
This is a fabulous work! I'm very impressed with the technicalities behind it - the way you have cleverly adapted the cannon jutsus into a modern and very believable technology. Astoundingly done!
It was a fantastic, exciting and very original read, with just the right dose of subtle romance.
Thank you for the fabulous read!
| SwiftKick 5/31/11 . chapter 3
OK I get it: 45kg at 161 is underweight! THANKS to the multiple people who have pointed this out.
Now go complain to the clueless Japanese author who MADE Sakura have those proportions at age 16.
Also...cannot fight? Anyone with the will to survive and the correct technical and anatomical knowledge can fight. When Sakura fights, she uses the force of her opponents against them. Physics, martial arts, and a medical background makes for a solid fighter.
I clearly wrote that it was not Sakura's pure strength that allowed her to be successfully combative.
| micha 5/31/11 . chapter 3
Nice story ,
but are you aware, that 45 kg at a height of 161 cm are clearly underweight?
There is no way, that a girl with this weight is really able to fight, i'm sorry to say.
| Guest 5/22/11 . chapter 3
| Guest 5/21/11 . chapter 1
| angel897 3/22/11 . chapter 3
intresting different story i like it
| Rayne 12/6/10 . chapter 3