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crusnik.gunslinger
2009-09-24 . chapter 21
haha your story made me laugh so hard! i was getting weird looks all while i was reading it! please hurry and update! plz i'll give you a box of chocolate!
GoddessPhoenix3173
2009-09-13 . chapter 21
Yay updates! Aw, May's in it too X3 She's so cute lol and loves Al XD Haruhi's getting cravings XD You still don't have a plan? XD And Father has got rid of all the homunculi 0.0 Lol, well when you do think of a plan I can't wait to read it X3 Awesome chapter! Please update soon!^^

See ya later!^^
mia826
2009-09-13 . chapter 21
Oh, and happy birthday. ^_^ I just celebrated my bday too, last Aug. 26. ^_^ Keep writing! And don't forget to add a super detailed description of Ed and Haruhi's kid when it (he, she, it?) gets born!! ^_^
mia826
2009-09-13 . chapter 20
OH YEAH YOU UPDATED! ^_^
tailendwriter
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
nice story so far, keep it up, and it is true about the whole voice actor thing you mentioned in the last chapter, it is tamaki ish.
Kaiko Aozora
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Sue, sue, suesuesue. Sorry, but this type of story just REEKS of 'Sue. I'd suggest putting Haruhi through the Mary-Sue Litmus Test. If by some miracle she scores as non-Sue, be very, VERY careful to avoid Sue-ness, because it's all too easy to slip over the edge.
fireice alchemist73
2009-09-12 . chapter 20
love the story had me wanting more
GoddessPhoenix3173
2009-09-03 . chapter 20
Yay updates! Aww, this chapter was kinda sweet ^.^ It's really good to have Al back in his body, and I really like how he acts towards everything. Ed and Haruhi are a great couple! I still wanna know what they are planning >.< Awesome chapter! Please update soon!

See ya later!^^
BlackStar-F
2009-09-02 . chapter 20
Please, PLEASE update as soon as possible!! I really missed this story! Every now and then I wondered, When is a new chapter of this story coming?
I am happy you updated, even if it was short!(:
mia826
2009-08-11 . chapter 19
Oh FINALLY!! You updated! I'm happy Al got his body back :) Keep writing!
Neko Ed Lover
2009-07-30 . chapter 3
Ah, sorry about not reviewing before...

THSI STORY IS AWESOME!

Ed is pervert. Haha! Ed is funny that way xD

I so love you for making this story!
(Caramelldansen)

Because I love this story!

:eek:
GoddessPhoenix3173
2009-07-30 . chapter 19
Yay updates! Al's still nude XD Can't wait to see what Ed's planning. Father's crazy >.< Awesome chapter!^^ Please update soon!^^

See ya later!^^
GoddessPhoenix3173
2009-07-15 . chapter 18
Yay updates! Lol, Ed got a shock when he woke up to see Haruhi =P Don't let Father hurt Al or Haruhi! >.< Awesome chapter! Please update soon!^^

See ya later!^^
konoha-leafsprite
2009-07-15 . chapter 18
this story is awesome i never had such an laugh in my life please update soon i always get grumpy when i can't read further
mia826
2009-07-15 . chapter 18
Hahaha thnx 4 updating i love your story!! :D Keep updating and don't you forget!! I love it!!
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