I think my favorite bit was Sideswipes observation of the effect living around humans has had on them, rubbing off on them and encouraging them to make the changes far too long in coming. It would certainly explain why, even though these guys have known each other literally for millions of years, none of the hook ups happen unitl AFTER they hit dirt (at least in fanfic *laughs*).

Poor Intertia. ;_;

I kind of already figured what happened to her, but it's another matter to have it confirmed.

Not bad. I like it.

C.D.

Not bad in the least. I was annoyed that you killed off Inertia, but Ce la vie (I have no idea if I spelled that right)(French for that's life).
Auctually I have a request, could you please go into more depth on 500 Miles? I think it has potential to become an even bigger story.

aww what a nice moment the twins shared.

this was good :)