Was Raines lying then? Is Kyle Thomson Jarod’s son, or Kyle’s clone? Either he lied to the carer, Kyle’s ‘mother,’ or he lied to Jarod.
I do not know, in actual fact, that Zoe is spelt without a ‘y,’ it is just that that is how most spell it; I don’t know if it has been shown in the show how her name is spelt, or how it is spelt in the subtitles, if the DVDs have subtitle features.
I wonder why Jarod got so upset, and why he didn’t remember meeting Rachel.
It was a little odd that Kyle ran away and that his ‘mother’ merely let him; he is just a kid, and she is an adult, unless she meant for him to do so, in which case, she’d have to go through an investigation in any case, I imagine, for letting him run away, and for failing to retrieve him; she would get in trouble for that…
I suppose that everything will be fine, now, will it, with the Center? We’ll have to see in your next chapter. Is Jarod confused that he married Zoe when he cares about Miss Parker so much? Is that why he wouldn’t answer her question in whole when they went outside with Sydney?
Kyle is twins with a girl called Kyla? Who is their mother? If Kyla exists, she would not be a clone, would she…
There are a lot of questions…
Keep writing. :-)

You're a great writer, but it's so sad for Miss Parker.
Jarod's married already and she had to endure that...

Anyways, I'm really all for the J-MP romance, but it's still fun to read your story! :D

I've very much enjoyed reading your story. I think I do prefer Zoey and Jarod to Miss Parker and Jarod.

You should finish it though, I sense it's coming to a nice conclusion.

Yay! You used the commas! I wonder what happens next? Is it significant that the boy is named Kyle?

I do not know if anyone has said so yet, but I think Zoe is spelt without a Y on the end. That seems to me, at least, to be a fairly recent spelling of the name. Sometimes, though, people will add those two dots at the top of the E, I think... the umluat... though I, myself, do not, but I guess it is up to you how you spell it, I guess, unless... maybe... if you had the DVDs and they had subtitles and you knew how to spell Zoe's name that way...?
Ah, so I read this chapter, and I am looking forward to the next. =)

Hello! I have read all of the six chapters you have written so far and I like that you are including Zoe in your story.
We will see in the next chapter how the story progresses, I guess.
On the note of constructive criticism, I wanted to tell you that when you have written a sentence with talking, and instead of a full stop, you can use a comma. I will show you.
For instance: Miss Parker could hear the phone ringing from down the hall. She ran to catch it before it stopped ringing, and brought the receiver up to her ear. "What?"
"Hello, Miss Parker," Jarod replied pleasantly.
Lame, I know, but I just wanted to show you that instead of the full stop when you are not using something like a question mark or an exclamation mark (!), you can use a comma.
If you do not include anything about the speaker after the talking, however, you can have a full stop. As in: Miss Parker slammed the receiver down and scowled. What a pain Jarod was! "One of these days, I am going to get an answering machine." With that, Miss Parker sighed and walked away from the telephone.
Anyway, that's all I wanted to say. Bye, and have a good day, I hope.

I love it! I can't wait to hear the rest of my story.

This seems too rushed. When people are talking, it seems like everyone has ADD or something because they change topics in the middle of asking or telling something.

Hi that was good can't wait for the next chapter.