I don't like it ...I LOVE IT!

Mikan never got to do what she wanted properly. Hahahaha

Well the male reproductive system IS less complex that the female's so.. XD

Keep writing!

-Black Maya

SORRY FOR WHAT I'M ABOUT TO SAY..

BUT THE STORY WAS KINDA BORING..

AFTER READING ONE OF MY FRIEND STORIES I WAS HOPING FOR SOMETHING MORE EXTREME... SO SORRY BUT IT WAS KINDA BORING FOR ME

!awesome

cool!

Kura: Hehehehe...Hotaru got caught by the boy that she likes...hehehe

Berry: ...

Kura: I wonder what will happen to them though...

Berry: ...

Kura: Awesome story! If you make a sequel, than I can't wait for it!

Berry: ...I'm leaving *leaves*

Kura: poo...meanie...BYE!

There gonna be a sequel 2 this saying wat happens with Ruka-kun and Hotaru-san? ;) There totally should be! XP

lol the ending is funny

I was SO happy when I saw that there was this sequel! I really liked this one too! Mikan didn't get to give him head though. Btw about that bro thing you said in your other 1 at least if any guy ever did anything to you you have 4 older brothers who could do something about it.

Lol!I liked the end part about hotaru and ruka the best was kinda funny.

LOL that was soo funny i loved health lesson aswell all great stories please make more great stories :D

Woah... I think I'm a little too young for that...

hehe...do i really need to say more?

the story was really good but man that was a cruel response lol

cause some guys can't help it, tell him to take extenze! lol

hahahah.. this is hilarious... xDD.. will you write somethin for hotaru and ruka?...aw that d be awesome.. :D... love it,...! write more stories!, _