| Reviews for The Wonders a Woman can do |
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xXDeathNote.Forever.Xx 9/24/11 . chapter 1Hah, I like it so far. Update soon! C: |
stracony26 3/15/11 . chapter 1nice...is it going to be continued? |
firestone99 10/12/10 . chapter 1I'd love to see how this story turns out! Please write more soon! |
reirobin 12/5/09 . chapter 1 Hi there! How you wanted the story to be like is very interesting. However, do not neglect the original personality of the characters like Tachibana. He would say:"I would love to but umm... *continue*" Another one is that how the story progresses really confuses me, I cannot seem to imagine what are you trying to deliver? The part where Amee said that Ono is gay really bothers me, it is just too sudden. Even if you want a character to be rude, try to make the conversation longer to the readers to actually build a strong personality for the female. -reirobin ( ?refname&id16841071) |
Rae37 9/28/09 . chapter 1 I love it! Please update soon! Thanks. |
Marshmallow94 9/24/09 . chapter 1 loved it! cant wait 2 see how ono handles this! hehehe... u poor sexy gay... |
George2Bob1 9/6/09 . chapter 1love the story so far cant wait 4 the next chapter |
Random 6/30/09 . chapter 1 Poor Ono, what a scary woman he'll have to deal with. update soon! |