Does your story follow the comic book? If you are, pls don't make Rogue dump Remy in Antarctica!! And make her able to control her mutant curse so she and Remy could live a happily ever after!
You should make Rogue unusually protective and motherly towards Rachel. A motherless child reminded Rogue of how tragic without a love of a mother. And setting a counterexample of Mystique's "motherly" role to Rogue, Rogue will promise to care for a child not the way Mystique did for her.
This motive would make Rogue very caring and emotional towards the baby...and possibly the only person she lets down all her emotional baggage behind.
Maybe you could write a scene where Remy caught Rogue cradling the baby and feel warm and fuzzy!

I am not familiar with Western traditions so I was confused with the bouquet and garter(what is that?) throwing. And was the dance really a part of the western wedding pratice or was it a ploy by Jean to get Rogue and Remy together?
I really liked the dance scene nevertheless. I actually used another song while reading it. It's Dina Carroll's "Someone Like You". Very romantic and intimate!

Okay so I just sat here and read the whole story and I am absolutely 100% in love with it! I swear if you don't write more I am going to cry cry cry. lol. So please please please write more soon!! And good luck with your english classes!!

omg loved it

Amazing. There are so many words I really wanna use, but I can't remember most of them >.> But I can list the reasons why this should be continued:

-The pairing is the number 1 reason
-2) You have such an amazing writing style that captures them both. If X-Men had been a book, I'm sure you would've written it.
-3) I love how you worked with their accents! >.> Most stories I read, they over-abuse the accents and make them much too heavy and difficult to read.
-4)I really really wanna find out what happens next!

Oh this chapter! Mr. LeBeau's finaly met his match! So cute! The dialogue here in this chapt flows so well, what they've exchanged, so meaningful. They're falling for each other *sighs* I'm loving your fic SO MUCH.

Oh I love your fic, the characters are exactly the way I love them! Really! This is great! 90s cartoons rock the most, I also base my characters on them. Great work!

Wow! This is excellent, but I'm pretty sure you already know that with all the reviews you already got! First, yay, Storm and Gambit's friendship! I love it, lots of people forget they should be the best of friends. I also try to show a bit of their friendship in my fics too. Also funny your ROMY are same age as my ROMy hehe
Oh and this is just the prologue, I'll keep reading and reviewing... if you don't mind your old chaps being reviewed after so long. :)

wow, ok, you've got me hooked. Hope to see an update soon.

omg! it HAS been a whole month since you've last posted! for me it seemed much longer. hahahahahaha. well, this chapter was completely worth the wait. Keep up the awesome good work and i hope that you do great in your classes!

Ack!

please update this soon!

Mystique is such a COW!

hugs good plot though and nice pacing and characterisation

could you have Logan sit on Mystique for me? hehe

Irual

PS study hard I will be patient I promise

The chapter is well worth the wait and I hope that in the last one they finally do become a couple. Bt I am also nervous because of the title of the story. If they have the right love, but it is the wrong time, they this story cannot end well. Which always makes me sad as a devoted ROMY shipper.

Aw of course! I have this issue in my collection! Its certainly one of my favourites!

You've done another terrific job! lovin' it!

Can't wait for the next part! And don't worry about the classes, you'll do great!

Again, a gripping read! I loved the Dark Phoenix storyline!

Full of lovely angst...yes the quotes! Had me smiling too when Gambit spoke to Wolvie.

“No worries Wolverine. Gambit was sure to say goodbye to you too.” Had me grinning like a Chesire Cat!

All of it...from Roge saying she loved him, to the way he desperately wanted to be by her side...such great Romyness!

Only two more chapters to go?! Oh eck!

Better read the next one I suppose! ;)

I feel kinda guilty!

I haven't been getting round to reading this recently, work...lack of time..usual excuses. (sorry!) but when you updated I had to catch up!

Scott and Jean now has the little one and trouble is brewing! Arguing and the such...hm.

I love how you made Rogue admit to the others (Yes Jean forced her with her powers...) her feelings about Gambit. He wouldn't be the one who hurts her...its the other way round!
Very nice stuff.

I shall keep reading...promise! ;)