This was really great! I loved it a lot and thought it was really cute. Nice job. ^_^

I just love fluff and you write them so well together! They're just so sweet when they're together and I really loved that moment when Marian realized that she was really in love.

Aw, this was beautiful! You do H/M vignettes so well. :-)

I especially liked Marian's realization; it's a lovely description of what it is like to be in love. And I'm so glad she told him - I think it was definitely in keeping with her character. She'd tell the truth, but she'd be nervous about it!

It's touching to see Harold's love for her, and how much he's changed. Those two are such a fun couple to write, aren't they? So full of passion, yet forced by circumstance to restrain. A great "tug of war."

Also, I'm glad you incorporated the hollow log into the fic - I always found that concept intriguing. :D And your ending was wonderful!