lol that was the coolest thing **SPLAT**

That war great. Loved the descriptions, poor Brainy, that womans a total **! I loled at the bit when the boy mentioned the bit about his dad going to the bathroom! X3 Keep writing;)

Aww, Taulno was so cute. Poor Brainy, getting mixed up like that. Great story.

Poor Querl! You write really well! Are there going to be more chapters in this story?

Aw! Poor Brainy! Very well written though, and a good stoey to boot!

WOW! good work very impresive! i will see what other storys you have done! update soon!

Glad to see this follow-up to your earlier piece. I'm curious now if Brainy will end up meeting any other Coluans on his travels.

Nicely done. :)

-- cleome

This was good! I'm not sure what else to say, except that i'm looking forward to more!
-b5

that was very well written! the descriptions were perfect and everything flowed very well. i also really liked the inner dialogue throughout the fic.

awesome job!

-D