Good chapter can’t wait until the next chapter. I did got a little confuse but I get it now.

Minor mistakes... but it's sweet! AWESOME! I don't know how to tell you how much I love this story!

Hahaha! That's so funny. Sandpiper. That's the place I went to go on vacation! Ha! But the names suits her flawlessly.

Now, about the chapter... hm... well, you spelled interrupted wrong with an extra "p, but, the spelling's great!

And Coal loves her... wow... Yay! You actually installed Microsoft Word? Great! That should help things a lot better! :D

Even though it says I'm spelling my real name wrong...



nakota2mustang

Awesome chap! And, yes, I just got back from vacation.

So, anyway, you're getting better at spelling! Only one minor mistake I had noticed: dissappeared, I think, is supposed to be disappeared. Besides that, it's one of the best-spelled (wait, is that a word?) chapters ever written!

this is a pretty good story surprisingly
don't worry about a slow start all good stories have them

I like your story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow another really good chap, and thanks for the shoutout! =)

Aw... thanks a lot, natno!

This is a great chapter! Really! The way you described the dying she-wolf was just... heartbreaking. It's hooked to me now! Even though I won't be here for a few days, or at least a week, I promise I'll come back and review this story! I promise I will!

Awesome chapter! I love the wolves part! Actually, I sent you a reply about what you could fix. ;)

See ya! I'll be gone for at least three days, as well!


nakota2mustang

Wow this story has me gripped! Well done! Your an excellent writer, I can't wait for the next chapter!! Post it quickly =)

Awesome! I can see you're working at your hardest writing the dialogue and all... and sometimes I spot a few goofs... however, this is probably the best chapter yet! :D Just keep writing! Just keep writing!

Once again, another awesome chapter! *thumbs up* I can't wait to see the third one! XD

Sweet! I love cliff-hangers! :D Awesome fic! You're a naturalist at writing! Way to go!