A very well done and surprising find. You have three things I consider extremely important in a story: an interesting idea, solid prose, and accurate characterizations. Please continue this story.

XD That was great! But yeah, I was surprised that Tomoya's declaration didn't at least come back to haunt Kyou later. And besides, she seems like someone who'd be quite admired. Perhaps a bit feared, but still.

Anyway, excellent work! The idea was great and well-executed. I could totally imagine the characters saying everything they did (hell, even down to Yukine). ^^b

I liked it. It would be fun if Kyou got a love letter from someone she thinks very highly of, such as a star athlete...