Nice, I'm a little confused about the time-line, but that is all. A good fic :)

Sigh, two months since an update, only 2 chapters, and we still don't really know what abilities naruto has besides empathy. Bummer.

D: LoL Naruto Yamanaka! this is gonna be good!

btw you alerted my story so i came to check you out

Neat story ya got here keep it up


Hee-Ho!

Wonderful Update! I am glad Naruto is help Hinata-chan maybe he will be rewarded in the future.

Ah, don't worry about grey hair since I find that the earlier one's hair greys, the wiser the person is compared to others their age.

When I saw the title I thought it was the game, IT's awesome, but I anyway I hope I will enjoy this story, ja ne

This is defintely going to be a ery Epic story that I know and pretty funny with your Booze HOund and Hench men show it almost Like my M-rated NaruHina story Naruto:Terror of the Einst Hinata Hour segment block which if you ever have the time try reading and reviewing it but if only you like Horror/Romance/Humor and a little Scifi.

Not much to begin with, but mostly in the details department. Then again it IS the first chapter so what can you expect. You might want ot signify this as AU though. Just so people are warned.

This is a story that a has lot of twist. It going to be a Epic NaruHIna story.

Looks like it have legs and arms. Can't wait for next chapters - if only to see if it still will have legs and arms.

Nice idea about not using Hiashi as Naruto's father.

Is it accident that your story is called the same as one quite new video game?

Nice start love the nanites cant wait to read moe