sad, but fantastic :')

Great story! Don't listen to people if they tell you it's crap. You got the emotion down great, but what did Papa die from? Guard dogs? (My pathetic attempt at a joke to make myself feel better.)

~theflawintheplan

P.S. I think I'm remember that last line forever.

"He didn't dream again."

Aww...poor Domi!! He;s so cute T__T
And Greg too...
Great job, is all I can say :)

Perhaps I'm forgetting my french classes but doesn't "pourquoi avez te papa?" mean "why we yours papa?".

Aww it was so sad, but adorable at the same time! I absolutley love Dom ^-^

Amazing story.
I really liked seeing everything from Dominic's point of view.
(Here, add another review to your collection!)

It's been a while since I had myself a good cry :3 I was worried for a sec because there were things out there that were sad but I didn't cry (I just finished Death Note...the ending was epic sad but where were the tears?) and I was wondering if my humanity was slowly disappearing. But it's not =) I'm glad.
Overall an awesome fic. I wasn't expecting a reappearance of Domi but here he is!! I love his French accent and how he wants to be like Tophe to make Gregory happy =) Poor Gregory...I've never been to a funeral lol.
I've always got a soft spot for dads...I don't know why. I probably just love mine so much since he is always so kind to me XD And in my opinion seeing dads cry is a thousand times more heartbreaking than seeing moms cry.
And YES I get lines stuck in my head too!! I thought I was the only one...for me it's mostly lines that get stuck rather than songs.

-mana