cool!

aw, i loved this one. its nice 2 think that the boys will always be there 2 look out for each other :) cnt wait 4 ya next one, update soon! x.

I liked that, it was great. Funny, I really liked the ending. I know these are all oneshots, but, this one could definitely be a longer story. It would be very funny seeing Zack change while he is learning to take care of the baby, :)

That was good. I still remember that assignment...I feel so sorry for Zack lol. Guess I'll haveta wait on the next chapter cause rivalry sounds like its gonna be a good one. Just don't make me wait too long.

Plodding, predictable, uninspired teen romance... apparently slipping in and out of first person? (By God's bones, this "younger generation" is all about the "P.O.V."!) And that "elemental" nonsense? Pisshaw... getridofit. First chapter's a throwaway, by anyone's standards; why bother with introductions when your target audience is already well-versed in Origins and Backstory? Any important details (of which there simply were none) regarding your made-up bastardizations -- commonly referred to, otherwise, as "O.C.s" -- should be sprinkled throughout the main narrative. Cody doesn't read well at all; for that matter, he's barely the same character; nothing the least bit unique or identifying. For a kid capable of memorizing string theory and studying differential equations in middle school, his intelligence is apparently lost on you. And Zack...? Well... he's not much more than an afterthought now is he? Duller than a bowling ball and half as bright. By Christ's nails and blood, write something original, something "worth reading." Methinks your colleagues have got the weak romance territory covered.

How'd i know it would be about Cody and Crystal? =\

That was good, poor Cody. He learned not to lie didn't he? Can't wait for your next little story. These are really good.

I like the first one. I like the elemental stuff alot. I can't wait to see what the other chapters are about.

This is really good. I want to learn more about the elementals but i'm normally just thrown into the story, and this takes it slower. Cody didn't have a good day, did he? One thing you might want to fix is you changing from 1st to 3rd person several times in teh story. Still a really good story and I look forward to more.

I'd hate to be Cody after that one, lol. This is good, I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for the next one. Update soon.

Ooh, I'm interested so far. 100 chapter of element stuff? Cool! I have a feeling I'm going to love it. I wonder what the chapter 'complicated' has to do with. I think of it as a ZackxRiley thing. Update soon.

awesome start :) cant wait 2 read more, update soon!; x.

great job! i loved it

100 themes? Sounds pretty interesting. I'm really curious to see where you'll take some of them, guess I'm just gonna haveta wait to find out. Hope some elemental stuff happens while they're on the ship, that'd be pretty cool. Update soon.