looking fwd to reading more, sounds an interesting plot

Ah, another lovely chapter that we all anticipated to read!

I very much enjoyed the extended conversation between N.E.S.T. and that asshole Galloway; the movie could've had them discuss alot more as to why they were no longer needed, and I like having things explained in an extended period of time rather than a short three or so minutes; but I loved how you had the gathered Autobots and humans seperated to different sections of the world in order to add more spice to this lovely story!

I loved the original characters - aside from Leiana I spy,who! lol - you added to the team, and the way you can capture personalities of the canon characters so well; Ratchet's dry sense of humor makes me really like this version of him, as I never really do see his 'funny side'. The way he pwned Galloway with that plastic surgery comment really stuck it to that asshole when he pissed off the human N.E.S.T. members and other Autobots with his dislikable attitude... This is better than the movie itself!

We await for your next chapter eagerly, my dear!

Lotsa love,

Ninjalala x

(Apologies for reviewing my own fiction; found it necessary to give the reviewer below a reply)

I'm sorry to hear that you think the female Special Ops characters in my fanfictions are 'Sues -- I had no idea that women weren't allowed in Special Ops, but even if they aren't, it's fiction. I'd prefer men and women to be as equal as possible in an ideal world, so if I include women in Special Ops in a fanfiction, so be it. Leiana's personality has barely been developed in this fiction, so I'd ask that you wait a little longer before you judge her character.

Kind regards,
Blackwing

you need to know this you write sue fics i'm not sure if your aware of it but this fic and your other ones all have mary sues in them. Women are not allowed in special ops. why would you put that in your fic? It just makes your characters all the more sue-ish You're an excellent writer but for the love of all this cannon stop writing the f-ing sue fics. They're a plague on humanity!

great story so far! It's well written, of course. Like all of your stories :)

I can't wait for the next chapters!!

Is Leiana going to be paired with Sunstreaker in this story? I hope so :D

great job!!

Oh my... Ratchet isn't very good at insults, is he...? *sighs* It's to be expected, I guess. He's got the idea, just needs practice. But keep writing, and once again good luck with your novel!

Oh, cool! About 25 chapters long, huh? Well worth the expected wait! Also, good luck on your novel! I myself started one 2 years ago, stopped and went to writing fanfiction as a hobby, then went back and realized that while the idea that I'd had before was good, my writing had REALLY improved. I'm saying that for one reason. (not that I'm probably the best person for advice, but still...) I've found it really useful to take my characters (change the name and appearance, perhaps) then plop them into a fanfiction world for development so that you don't have to be constantly (in my case, anyway) trying to figure out how the world works and just work on how your character acts and stuff. For me, it really helped improve my writing style as well. And all this from someone who still has to listen to their parents when they are told they can't join this place! (that would be why I don't think I really needed to say all that... excuse my ramble. On the other hand, for people like me who go through and read others reviews, it might at least help them, right? *waits, then sighs at own stupidity*) Yeah, I rambled for no reason. But I AM really looking forwards to this story!

Y'know, I think Lennox had the right idea by throwing that afthole Galloway of a plane. I can only hope, after the events of RoTF, that he got terminated without pay or appeal. Jerk.

Sideswipe OMFG! He's awesome, and didn't get near enough screentime in the film. I'm so getting his Deluxe figure X)

As for Ratchet's parting shot...BURNED, y'damned pen-pusher! :D

Any chance of having Rose in the story?

Oh wow! I think you did an excellent job dialoguing that Galloway guy and the NEST team. He really has something his ass! Definitely!
But if the Transformers leave, I'm not gonna be happy! *grumpy*
Woohoo! Leiana! All right! Interpreting Leiana in a manner as a Sargeant is an excellent Idea!
*sigh* Can't wait to see what other characters you use. *hint hint* LOL.
ROCK ON, Girl! And may primus watch over Ratchet as he makes his way over seas with Bracewell. *salutes*

OH hun! This is totally awesome so far. I am thrilled that I am finally able to read the long awaited story you have been promising us!
This story is ideal and mysterious so far. I truly wonder what they will say has been unconvered...Teehee.
Wonderful job as always, hun!

Hey,

I got the impression in the movie that Arcee was the pink one, Chromia was the blue one but I don't know about the third one but according to imdb, it's either Moonracer or Firestar.

But I'll suspend belief for this story where Arcee seems to be all three, though slightly confusing because it's been introduced to my head as being three different bots. xD

Next chapter! This is getting really good! Keep up the good work! :)

That's a good twist: 'missions for the government in exchange for continued asylum'
I didn't like Galloway in the film, and it's starting to look like he's going to be a jerk to the Autobots in the story as well. I don't care how, but I want him to get it in the end somehow... as in a little paybacks. Plus, you've successfully managed to capture the depth of the loyalty between the NEST members, Autobots and humans. Good work.

This story is extremely promising. Good luck with future installments!
-Mistflyer

Totally 'mazing...Thankfully i watched the movie already now i understand what's going on. This story is seriously cool, keep it going!