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Reviews for: Her Safety Net
RoseTyler-Smith-Doctor's Wife
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
aw well miss popular I'm gona make review 13! obs I've read it ages ago but I still love reading it over and over again X
Steeldust-01
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
Great first story.
Very touching!
jennabby
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
loved it :) was really awesome for a first fanfic :)
Hope you write more SMacked i would love to read some XD
Jen xx
csi-ncis
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
That was a great little one-shot. I love how you incorporated Claire because you can't just leave her out of the situation. Using Stella to clarify that Claire was still apart of Mac instead of Mac making that point is the best, they should use that in the series, if the put them together!
messermonroeforever125
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
great first fanfic! I loved it...you could see the love they have for each other. fantastic job and write more soon!
Mynerva24
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
*sigh* This is one sweet story. Your take on how Stella words her thoughts of how Claire fits in her relationship with Mac is just brilliant. I'm also touched by the way she takes the coin case as something that is hurtful, but in the same time, as a blessing, which open the way for them to get together. Excellent job!
shawdoo
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Beautifully written! Very impressive for a first fic. You captured Mac and Stella very well. I loved how you brought Claire into the story. She'll always be a part of Mac. Hope you be writing more SMacked fics
sparkygirl82
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Absolutely love it!
EleBother
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Woah, I love it! Really well written, and just Smacktastic!
x
Andorian Ice Princess-AIP
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Well this story made me smile so thanks for the great read! And it's your first so congrats on a great first story! well done indeed!

Loved the emotions, like her looking away so Mac could regain himself, very much in character. And the part about Claire, a touchy subject but nicely written. Keep up the good work!

AiP
lily moonlight
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
This was really nice! I enjoyed reading it, and thought you wrote it really well. I liked all your descriptions and how you wrote their relationship. Hope you write some more soon :)
aislara
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Hello:)

Welcome to the ranks of the fanfiction writers :)

I liked that you included Claire into your story. I'm a Smacked fan as well, but I think that sometimes that aspect of Mac's life gets overlooked in Smacked romances. I agree that Mac has room for both of them in his heart. There is the wicked part of me that thinks Mac felt something for her while they were married, but just surpressed it well.

Keep writing!

Aislara
cmaddict
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Very cute and very fluffy. But fluff is good... I like fluff :D I liked her thoughts about how their relationship changed over the years. And I definitely liked how they discussed how Claire would affect their relationship, since I believe that's been a big deterrent for him over the years. And I can see that playing out if (and hopefully when) they get together. Over all, very well done, especially for your first fic :D Keep it up!
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