 RoseTyler-Smith-Doctor's Wife 2009-08-17 . chapter 1aw well miss popular I'm gona make review 13! obs I've read it ages ago but I still love reading it over and over again X |
 Steeldust-01 2009-06-25 . chapter 1Great first story.
Very touching! |
 jennabby 2009-06-24 . chapter 1loved it :) was really awesome for a first fanfic :)
Hope you write more SMacked i would love to read some XD
Jen xx |
 csi-ncis 2009-06-23 . chapter 1That was a great little one-shot. I love how you incorporated Claire because you can't just leave her out of the situation. Using Stella to clarify that Claire was still apart of Mac instead of Mac making that point is the best, they should use that in the series, if the put them together! |
 messermonroeforever125 2009-06-22 . chapter 1great first fanfic! I loved it...you could see the love they have for each other. fantastic job and write more soon! |
 Mynerva24 2009-06-22 . chapter 1*sigh* This is one sweet story. Your take on how Stella words her thoughts of how Claire fits in her relationship with Mac is just brilliant. I'm also touched by the way she takes the coin case as something that is hurtful, but in the same time, as a blessing, which open the way for them to get together. Excellent job! |
 shawdoo 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Beautifully written! Very impressive for a first fic. You captured Mac and Stella very well. I loved how you brought Claire into the story. She'll always be a part of Mac. Hope you be writing more SMacked fics |
 sparkygirl82 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Absolutely love it! |
 EleBother 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Woah, I love it! Really well written, and just Smacktastic!
x |
 Andorian Ice Princess-AIP 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Well this story made me smile so thanks for the great read! And it's your first so congrats on a great first story! well done indeed!
Loved the emotions, like her looking away so Mac could regain himself, very much in character. And the part about Claire, a touchy subject but nicely written. Keep up the good work!
AiP |
 lily moonlight 2009-06-22 . chapter 1This was really nice! I enjoyed reading it, and thought you wrote it really well. I liked all your descriptions and how you wrote their relationship. Hope you write some more soon :) |
 aislara 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Hello:)
Welcome to the ranks of the fanfiction writers :)
I liked that you included Claire into your story. I'm a Smacked fan as well, but I think that sometimes that aspect of Mac's life gets overlooked in Smacked romances. I agree that Mac has room for both of them in his heart. There is the wicked part of me that thinks Mac felt something for her while they were married, but just surpressed it well.
Keep writing!
Aislara |
 cmaddict 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Very cute and very fluffy. But fluff is good... I like fluff :D I liked her thoughts about how their relationship changed over the years. And I definitely liked how they discussed how Claire would affect their relationship, since I believe that's been a big deterrent for him over the years. And I can see that playing out if (and hopefully when) they get together. Over all, very well done, especially for your first fic :D Keep it up! |