 Chewie Cookies 2009-10-14 . chapter 1OH, BEAUTIFUL! That was GREAT!
RaiderXV tells me u have more NaruHina fics! I'd better take a look at those, too!
Keep up the good work! |
 Z LOT847 2009-10-10 . chapter 1jeez, forget plot bunnies, this was a plot elephant! great story! |
 imatwilightfan 2009-10-09 . chapter 1it was really OOC of hinata to defend naruto by fending off anko and ino but i loved the story since it's naruhina. great job! |
 ~*~cAsEy~*~ 2009-10-06 . chapter 1 Dude this was an freaking awesome story! I Love it when my favorite pairing gets intimate. You have wonderful description skills! And the Sakura, Ino, and Anko pervert bit... hilarious! Keep writing. I'll be watching! |
 Hektols 2009-10-02 . chapter 1It was very funny. I think that Ino and Anko should be imprisoned, they sexually attacked another Konoha nin. |
 MomochiNaruto 2009-10-01 . chapter 1Ok.
Funny. Good job. |
 BlackRoseFire 2009-09-20 . chapter 1Awesome. I loved it. |
 TheFirstChild 2009-09-13 . chapter 1Wow, I really like this story, good choice of wording to, you don't get that in many stories anymore. Anyhow, I think you did an awesome job, congratulations. |
 WolfDragonGod 2009-09-06 . chapter 1sweet fic it was funny and good plus the thought was cool flash techniques that was a total first...you did good. |
 Ivellios 2009-09-02 . chapter 1Hey you don't need flashy writing techniques to write a good story. You didn't even have to describe the really ecchi parts. Just what you wrote was really good. And if my review is a little discombobulated, it is because I am about to fall asleep on my keyboard.
Anyway, good one-shot, I really enjoyed it!
Sincerely,
Zach |
 PisceanPal23 2009-08-29 . chapter 1I honestly don't know what I can say about perfection, which is what I though this fic was. I mean, seriously, I've never read something that made me laugh so much, or was so well written, or was so romantic on this site yet! It was written well, very few mistakes to take away from it...I don't know what else I can say, except FAVOURITED! And that I hope I see more from you with this great a caliber! Bravo! |
 Silver Warrior 2009-08-23 . chapter 1oh wow. That was a fun little piece of randomness! *snickers* oh poor Hinata getting pestered so! |
 kd8gun 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Nice work with this one! My question though is when is the next chapter of An Idiots guide to the Universe coming out? |
 gaul1 2009-07-18 . chapter 1nice story, bye |
 Crystalzap 2009-07-15 . chapter 1that was great LOL |