 kat6919 2009-07-07 . chapter 1"Sam smiled. She’d been right the first time, Sam realised. She was home: she was with Jack." I love this line. Perfectly sums up how I think Sam and Jack feel about each other. I really like that you brought back the Nox. I feel like Jack does "gotta love those guys" |
 Kirra 2009-06-26 . chapter 1 Another great story. You manage to maintain good quality throughout. Thanks for all the entertaining, credible and substantial reads. |
 sg-1fanintn 2009-06-25 . chapter 1Wonderful story! Concise, yet full of detail. As usual, I enjoyed it. |
 sg1star 2009-06-25 . chapter 1that was lovely, just enough emotion for jack and an adventure for sam, and for her to find a toto from jack favourite film... |
 mmkfire 2009-06-24 . chapter 1great story.
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 codo 2009-06-24 . chapter 1 Great as always. It's always such a treat when you post a new story. |
 Yollie 2009-06-23 . chapter 1 Absolutely delightful story. Read it in one sitting and was really happy to see that all ended nicely for Jack and Sam. Thanks and write more please! |
 texas 2009-06-23 . chapter 1 good job well done |
 i.m. nell 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Beautiful. Tender. Harrowing. Suspenseful. Great character development. Delightful to have the Nox come to her rescue. |
 SJC8 2009-06-23 . chapter 1I love the story and as always so well written. Sometimes it's hard to come across Sam and Jack stories that are not total mushy fluff. I like the way you write them as fully rounded adults including all the anst of their respective military positions.
However, there were a couple of things that bugged me but only because I'm an oceanographer. Plankton are microscopically small so they wouldn't be much of a meal, there are thousands of the little blighters in a teaspoon of seawater. You've probably eaten a few if you've ever swam in the sea hence the 'eat more plankton' dive t-shirts. Perhaps you were thinking of shrimps?
Brackish water is the slightly salty water that you get high up in estuaries where the river meets the sea.
Otherwise, fantastic stuff :-) |
 cflat 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Really great story! And that was an interesting idea- having the Nox being in the Pegasus Galaxy, I mean. |
 Gen Varel 2009-06-23 . chapter 1A wonderfully romantic story. You didn't disappoint. I wish you wrote more of these more often. Thank you. |
 samfan9 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Love the story! I like that it is not the usual search and rescue. I cheered that Carter kicked butt and escaped by herself. I enjoyed the twists and turns. Aboveall, I applaud your posting this story in one chapter. Thank you so much for writing and sharing. |
 Zoser 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Sweet story |
 Devilish Me 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Beautiful. :) |