As always, delctable. I definately enjoyed this insight into Jane's mother's charactor. Reading your work is always a pleasure.

Well written! Very professional :)

I liked this alot! Nicely done :)

In some ways, Adeline felt that by watching her daughter, she was getting a glimpse of what her father must have been like.

That line truly touched me... This was a brilliant piece, I loved it so much!! I think you wrote the characters beautifully in this fanfic. Wonderful job!