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the scatterbrained oracle
2009-08-19 . chapter 27
Oh, this story is beautiful!
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2009-07-22 . chapter 27
I love your fanfics especially discoveries it's like the best yukiXtohruXkyo fic I've ever read I think. You know hows all along you’ve spelled Tooru and Kyou? It’s spelled Tohru and Kyo all though maybe Kyou is grammatically correct for Japanese name like that?
XxRoGuExHeArTxX
2009-06-16 . chapter 27
I just have to start by saying, this is without doubt one of THE BEST fanfics I have ever read, ever. And seriously, I've read a LOT of fanfiction.

I looked absolutely everywhere for a good YukixTooruxKyou story, because like Tooru I can't choose either. Most of the few I've found are so poorly written, though! Yours, however, perfectly captures their individual personalities and progresses so naturally that it seems like an extension of the manga. Their relationship unfolded so naturally, so beautifully- I absolutely love it.

And your original characters! I have to say, I usually despise original characters in a story. However, yours were so engaging and each one had a distinctive personality that contributed greatly to the story. I love Kin-san!

I have been reading this obsessively for the past few days, and have been driving my boyfriend absolutely INSANE. All I've talked about is how awesomely amazing your story is, and telling him about different parts. I have many favorite parts, but one of my favorites, one of the phrases that keeps coming back to me, was earlier on when Tooru was crying because she wouldn't get to finish high school, and you described it saying something like "she cried the way a girl cries when she realizes a dream is gone." I know it sounds so simple, but in that one simple phrase I knew exactly what you meant, and I could imagine exactly how she felt.

And now that I have laid forth my praise, I must ask... no, beg of you, please... don't leave it here! Even if you don't finish it, soon or ever, please, just one more chapter, with a slightly happier ending? Or at least a more hopeful ending? I have felt warm and fuzzy for so much of your story, and to leave it like that... ah! As a fellow author, I certainly know how easily life can take front seat. But please, have mercy upon me, one of your newest, dearest fans, and update!
ProcrastinatingPalindrome
2009-04-27 . chapter 27
Damn, I love this fic so much...eagerly looking forward to the next update (or whenever you update any of your fics, they're all so good.)
Meco45
2009-03-11 . chapter 27
you know all along youv'e spelled Tooru and Kyou. Its spelled Thoru and Kyo
Purble
2009-02-11 . chapter 27
Yay! An update. I can't wait for your other stories.
I must say that I am really fond of the reactions everyone was having in these two chapters. Very nice.
I must also compliment you on your level of detail as they go about their lives, it makes what they are doing that much more real.
qgjpadawan
2009-01-14 . chapter 27
wow, wut an adventure u had these past months ^^. i myself understand this house business. my family had to sell our house and it took months. those last few wks b4 it was sold were, how should i say this, stressful. the family who bought it kept stalling and bringing up stuff we had to fix. it was ridiculous. and many times they threatened, in a polite manner, that they wouldnt buy it if we didnt fix the stuff that the inspector said needed to b replaced/fixed. lol. it was dumb lil stuff they could've done on their own. well, 'cept for the roof, that did need repairing. and then 1.5 mths following, were spent on seeking an apt for 4 ppl. it was hard only cuz we had to have one on the bottom floor (dad has knee probs). so 3 of us stood at one of my lil sis' apt in the meantime. its claustrophobically small so u can imagine 4 of us plus a baby and cat staying there, getting on ea others nerves. lol. dad was stubborn and decided to live in the car. he had to move around alot cuz of the cops. lol. i offered to take turns w/him, but darn him and his pigheadedness. lol well at least we finally found a nice apt to live in. it actually feels like a small 2 bedroom house. heh, i'm supposed to complement ur story. all i can say is, i will gladly go after Dreaming0 w/a pitchfork. i wont maim her...much. lol i'm glad ur doing well and hope u had a good holiday as well. i hope u finally got ur house ^^. i will be waiting for the next chapter w/high expectations. lol. cant wait for next chapter of Full Course. the only hatori/tohru story i enjoy the most ^^. keep up the good work and take care ^^.
Oreithyia
2009-01-09 . chapter 27
How is it that a story of this quality does not have more reviews?

The pacing in this story is spot on, and the trio's handling of romantic notions and physical urges is refreshing in it's awkwardness. I get so tired of instantaneous Don Juans and femme fatales.

Honda-san angry. I absolutely love it. It has been a long time coming. I also was quite amused be the boys total loss at how to deal with it.

Bravo.
saki
2009-01-04 . chapter 27
I'm so thrilled that you have contuined to write this fic. It's the only Furuba story that I still follow. I love your writing style and how realistic all the problems that the trio encounters and have to go through. I hope you eventually finish this story no matter how long it takes!!
Enigma-Nemesis
2008-12-31 . chapter 27
Absolutely well worth the wait :)

I really like how you dealt with the issue of sharing Tooru *intimately* in this chapter between Kyou and Yuki. It felt very realistic, as well as in-character. And the pacing was very well done too!

It looks like things are getting incredibly interesting, especially when school resumes...

I hope to see another update of ANY of your stories soon! I'm excited to read more of Full Course, Spotted!, and, of course, Discoveries! :)
Hoku ala
2008-12-30 . chapter 27
I wonder how the no secrets thing will work out...

I like the different side of Tooru your showing. Getting mad and staying mad. Your making a charater into a human.

I can't wait to see whats next!
azherd
2008-12-29 . chapter 27
I luv this story, but I think you're making Tohru, Yuki and Kyo a lot more "romance-craving" then u should. its getting a little boring when ur chapters are composed of mostly those scenes. I like ur writing style tho, and u make a good use of OCs. What I mean is that ur story is great, but ur characters r getting a bit OOC since they r more "romance-craving" then u would ever expect from any form of their characters. I hope u update more frequently, and keep the length of ur chapters long and "juicy".
Julie5
2008-12-28 . chapter 27
Seriously!! What the heck! You can't just end like that. And NO! Not just sleeping! Man I totally love the update but then again there's nothing you write that's not golden. PLease update again soon. This ones my own favorite. You are the awesomest fanfiction writer ever. Thank you for writing.
brite
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Hi!
Um, this might sound a little weird. I've been reading your stories for four years now. I love them. They were my first love in Furuba fanfiction, and they were what inspired me to try writing myself. I read 'Changes' and thought, "Wow. I want to do THAT." As a writer I've always really looked up to you, and as a reader I continue to worship your stories.
...And I'm only just now reviewing. ^_^;; There's really no good excuse;I'm just dreadfully lazy. Anyway, like all of your other stories, I've been enjoying 'Discoveries' immensely. I really admire your handling of the characters, especially in this last chapter. It's hard, watching your precious fictional people suffer; I'm glad that you give Yuki, Kyo, and Tooru time to react and reflect on all the upheavals in their lives.
I loved Yuki's line about a third of the way through, when Tooru is rejoicing over how small the apartment is, and Yuki says, "That's one way to look at it." Hee. Poor Yuki. He really takes a beating this chapter doesn't he! Still, I'm looking forward to your next installment. Huzzah for awkward sexual tension and the possibility of threesomes! (I hope I'm reading the undertext correctly. I thought that might be what you were hinting at, but I could just be totally wrong. If I am, please feel free to ignore that last sentence.:)
Well, I'm a bit late for "Merry Christmas", but I'm still in pretty good time for "Happy New Year"! Good luck on your house hunting, and I hope your teeth are all healthy and that you feel better now!
Ange Noir
2008-12-27 . chapter 27
I love your stories! And don't worry about the delay. I think you're the only author that even if it takes months for an update, I can never fault you for that. Besides your chapter are so epic long they feel like an actual story chapter. Even this update took me a few days to finish reading which I absolutely love. I'm giddy with anticipation for full course. It's my favorite story of yours and only helped booster my love for this pairing. Some parts in this chapter were so uncomfortable but in a good way you know? I had to take a breather just to keep my blushing episodes at bay
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