Oh, this was good! Kuronue had much too much fun planning and acting out this "lesson" for Yomi. I loved your characterization for each of them. It was obvious, in everything from speech to their reactions, that Youko and Kuro were fully grown thieves and manipulators while Yomi was just the young whelp with a big mouth. And you know your smut was, as always, great! I'm pretty sure I'll be reading this again soon. :)

Two mistakes I noticed:

"Too, he was reckless" - I don't understand the placement of this "too." It seems like it's acting in place of an "also."

“So I believe that would a ‘no’,” he - forgot the word "be" before "no"

PLEASE tell me you're doing a sequel of this with Yomi's revenge? Hell, I think it even be great if it was a thousand years later, during Kurama's time with him before the tournament...we would sadly lose Kuro but...gah, a Revenge Yomi/Kurama would make my YEAR!!

Back on topic: this was ** amazing!! I don't think I ever stopped smirking through a single minute of it - the banter between Kurama and Kuronue was hilarious, as well as believable and well-placed. Your writing is, as ever, wonderful to read and paints a...sinfully beautiful picture for the mind.

Amazing. The little snippet previews you gave me didn't do it any justice! You're amazing and great job! I'm sure Tak loved it.

(P.S. I am overloading the system and subscribing/favoriting everything I can in hopes that something will change...)

O__o;

Wow. This was yummy. (Understatement of the year!) The writing was amazing, as always, and their characterizations where... well. I have no words. This was just a pleasure to read in several respects. Dark, kinky, devilish, and I do so love that you tortured Yomi. It was hot, and not undeserved.

I 'pologize for not talking to you for so long. I miss hearing from ya, but hopefully this review works by way of apology.

*Glomps the sexeh bishies and faves*

Blackrose

I am not sure my hand could move fats enough to stroke you for all you´ve earned yourself by made this beautiful one-shot!I was left breathless after finishing it, feeling like a fish going without water when it´s too hot here:-D Some beuaties you write, that I love, all of them.
Care to finish the older ones, I hope you do, I´ve been waiting for them.
Awazing:-D

Thank you so much! I love it and you've written, what is in my eyes a perfect one shot. I wouldn't change a thing about it even if I could.

LOL, and no I don't think Yomi learned the lesson that Kuronue had intended. But, just perhaps, maybe he came away knowing that what he desired would never be his by fair means. *considers* but somehow I doubt that matters to him anyway.

Once again, great job and THANK YOU!

OMFG that was hot! Those bandits are downright wicked... and I loved it.

stroking, my dear...pant pant pant...must open a window, fogging up in here. Man that was HOT!! Worth every bit of the year.