Very interesting and insightful.

Fantastic story. Interesting twist, and I thought the characterization was very accurate.

Great story

Really good one-shot. I love Setsuna. lol and I love Haruka staying in character... ^^

Wow, this was a remarkably well-written and insightful story. You kept everyone in character and gave Setsuna a good amount of development, as well as actually making Mamoru interesting. Thanks for sharing.