i liked it! it was good!

No No No !
I enjoyed the story so much but Katherine with Mike No! I can't see that getting too far but Susan with Mike yes :) Overall a good story but I disliked Katherine with Mike but really that is my own opinion

Brilliant. Just brilliant. You captured the tone of the show perfectly, which I find some writers really struggle with.

especially loved: skipping the reception and rushed upstairs to lock herself in the bathroom and, if she was lucky, die there.

and...If asked, Bree would say the wedding was a lovely affair.

In fact, all of Bree's bits.

Glad you made the brave decision of Katherine instead of Susan also :)

A very sophisticated piece of fanfiction here.

Like I said, brilliant.

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You are a very good writer! You should do this professionally if you don't already. Great grasp of the characters. I want Mike to marry Susan though. Sorry! But, the scene you wrote for Mike & Katherine was a good one. Great job! ~Scholargirl77~

"But she did not see her new husband looking out the window towards Susan Mayer’s house."

... WHYY, MIKE?! *doom* do you WANT me to hate mike? do you?! even more than mark cherry?! Dx

but other than that, it was adorable. i love that mike chose katherine (and hopefully stayed that way and didn't give in to lingering feelings, RAWRR) and the bree/karl snippet was so cute. :D and, obviously, lynette and tom ... aww.

more? :) or just ... update something else, lol.

great job!

I liked it, especially Lynette's part :D And I'm also happy you included Katherine (I'm sad for her because Mike is going to treat her like **, but we all know that's going to happen anyway...) I enjoyed the way you describe romantic scenes between Bree and Karl. And I'm curious to know what Gabrielle might find in Ana's diary :)