I was sad and interested till the end where u were like, "this made me HAPPY."

This was so sad! Great fic, though.

but this made me sad. oh. i actually had one of those sighs, where you want to keep reading but it's hard.

"And had their story been different, their roles rewritten - she might have been his." guh. why oh why.

in every time line, they end together even if dead.

goodness. wonderful work. love it. and this is not blurry. not at all .

And you SHOULD be happy! You have every right to

because this story was just oh-so-beautiful that it almost made me cry just thinking about it, not because of the tragedy but because it was so wonderfully written!

There may have been no happy ending, but you made it seem okay (in a twisted sort of way).

Sakura's random musings to Sasuke, and her silly plan, and Sasuke's inner-battles were the best part. And even better, that he never deterred from his goal (because then the whole tragic part of this story would've lost its whole point). Despite that though, Sasuke did lose... because he developed a loose attachment to her, which means she was able to get to him, even if it was just a little bit.

This story could've ben mistaken as a poem, for every word and sentence was poetic. And the quote at the end tied the knot quite nicely.

Beautiful.

It was tragic, fleeting, - yet lovely.

Great job.

-zanibarr

oh my god that was so sad...well written though. short but touching. great job. i enjoyed it, in a it-made-me-sad way.

I REALLY liked this one! _...like no joke u should really publish these...well without getting fined of course

O.o w-o-w...I FREAKIN LOVED IT! SO ROMANTIC*SQUEALS* WRITE MORE!

Wonderful.

I am trying so hard (hint: trying) NOT to cry.

I cannot believe he killed HER?

and if I hadn't read any of your other works than I would have thought that you were utterly disturbed.

)

And even though this story will more than most likely give me nightmares (cause he killed her) I think that you still deserve a cookie ( but its gonna be oatmeal since you made me cry)

Princess Bhria

:/

this almost made me cry

I ike it a lott:]

This made me happy too. Actually, well, I mean. Crap. Saying that makes me sound creepy and sadistic. It makes me happy BECAUSE it's wonderful and beautiful and intricate and perfect and everything and anything. It's sad, of course, but chyeah.

I liked. I loved. I still want some MOAR. Teehee. :)

Anywho. I still have one more story to read by you. Procrastination ftw, amirite or amirite? Ughh. I'm tired.

:D I loved it. Seriously. FOR REAL. Fer sure.

3 Yep.

COOL! LOVED IT!

Wow. That was ridiculously good and amazingly well written. The simplicity of it all, how their story wasn't elaborate, but cut down to the essentials, made it all the more powerful. Great job!

That was really moving. I enjoyed it and I liked the ending...

I love how I liked the ending because someone died and it was sad and regretful. I am soo messed in the head...

Well, great job! :)