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Rachel.
2009-12-02 . chapter 1
It looks very well written compared to some stories on here although I've only read one chapter so far I hope the story continues!
I've been looking around for a good online story to read and it seems this will be the one.
:D
creative-writing-girl13
2009-11-30 . chapter 10
Aw this is cute and Peter is jealous!
Barbiegirl 22
2009-11-28 . chapter 10
he's back... well i loved these last two chaps. i <3 tide he sounds so cute. and peter is so jelous who will she chose? cant wait for more update soon.

barbie =D
Barbiegirl 22
2009-11-21 . chapter 8
ah! how can you end like that! u soo better update soon becuse your just leaving me hanging here! and its a pirate isnt it? well loved the chap but not the ending, update asap.

barbie =D
65ashben
2009-09-28 . chapter 7
Yay. Another awesome chapter. Is she going to stay in Neverland or is Peter going to at some point stay with her in the real world? I can't wait for more!!
clear skye
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
aw. i love how peter comes to christine's rescue! and i agree that the twins are getting some much deserved payback. keep up the good work!
Barbiegirl 22
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
aww payback is sweet and swine know how u feel had it last week. it stinks. but i loved this chapter yay cant wait for the next!

barbie =D
OceaNMist
2009-09-03 . chapter 6
Love it! why haven't you updted??
65ashben
2009-08-29 . chapter 6
Oh no! Poor Christine. The chapter was great. I love the story. I can't wait for more!!
clear skye
2009-08-26 . chapter 6
woah! this chapter is such an unexpected turn! great chapter and keep up the good work!
Barbiegirl 22
2009-08-18 . chapter 6
hi!! great chap now lets see peter give a hevy dose of karma to zeke and billy they deserve it you know they do. and then off to neverland!yays =D!

barbie =D
dancinggirl42609
2009-08-15 . chapter 6
yay yay yay!!

great chapter!!
i can't wait to find out what Peter's going to do to them.
please please update soon.

XD
dancinggirl42609
2009-08-15 . chapter 5
this is such a great story!
i love it so far!!
please please update soon!!

XD
Crazy4beverages
2009-08-07 . chapter 5
omg put me in this chapter i'll kill he people who hurt christine!
Barbie
2009-08-05 . chapter 5
i<3 ur story. cant wait for the nxt chap! also what will peter do to her brothers scare the crap out of them or worse :p mwa hahahah!! (insert evil grin here) well cant wait for n update. also will neverland be 2x better her than anyone else?

ur fan
barbie;D
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