to much rape i'm only on chapter 4 but good story attection i guess

My daughter recommended your story to me and I took today to read it through. It is wonderful. I really enjoyed it very much and usually I only read Twilight based stories. Well this one is making me re-think that. I will have to start checking out other stories that are out there now.

Thank you for a wonderful story.

Take care

Holy fucking shit, this is so so so so good. i knw that it is somewat inapropriate but doesnt really matter cuz i am always reading these kinds of stories in books. u should send this to a publisher and see if they can turn it into a book. of course u are going have to fiz it up a bit and add more detail but really i thnk that this story might just might have chance. and if i doesnt then oh well because me and many other people love it.

Well, i thnk that this story is ver unapropriate but it still rocks a lot. Continue writing stories!
:)

Holy shit, this is so good. i am just on chapter 2 but this is rocking so far. i read the reviews and they said it was good. i hope so because it is really hard to find good stories. i am no longer really reading the twilight ones cuz so many ppl write really bad and suckish stuff. I share this acount with my friend cuz we are going to write stories or separate and post them.

OMG I LOVE IT IT'S AMAZING! i think there should be a sqeul! xD really omg i love this story!!

omg it's amaazing holyy crap i love it xD

omg it's amazingg =)

I just read this story and I have it say it is one of my absolute favs!
Loved it!I can't wait for the sequel!

haha cowboys and ponys lol..wait the story is over NO! haha hurry post the next storie

this waz good lol

Zomg. Loved it! XD Funniest ending ever.
It was a great story, it had everything.
I really hope you do a sequel,
it'd be cool to see vamp Evie kick ass. XD
Well congrats on a fanfiction ending!
=D

wtf?! thats how this fantastic, funny and exciting story ends!? you have got to be kidding me, seriously. please put another chapter on how she kills seth or something. gosh. im so shocked.
umm.. well other than that, great chapter. and its pretty funny i love evie
please DO ANOTHER CHAPTER and properly finish it.

xx

OMG! that was awsome!
can you make a seuqual? preaty please!
lol hilarious ending

im so sorry! i wasent here to review!