|Reviews for Thought Process|
| whitestsky 8/28/12 . chapter 1
| HeroSpirit 10/28/10 . chapter 1
This... is a story?
It really doesn't seem like it, you need to post this in a forum rather than posting it as a story
| kjdkueiujsdkj 4/20/10 . chapter 1
OHMYGOD! People make fanfics of this? I LOVVE YOU!
...normally I'm much more articultate. ]
| D. M. Russo 2/28/10 . chapter 1
It sucks! No offence but it SUCKS! S.U.C.K. Okay it's not that bad but it sounds like a comentary from a kid. So for tips:
1: Make that story flow more. it's really rough but you have an out-line.
2:More descriptive words.
| Ehh 12/20/09 . chapter 1
Didn't fancy it too much. It was from the view of Hazumu and didn't seem much like him. :/
| Jakessj3 10/24/09 . chapter 1
hey i really think this is good i can't wait for you to write some more. so keep it up
| Fanboy 10/11/09 . chapter 1
This is an utter waste of valuable human time... And it should burn in hell, with its creater along with it... Te he...
| 5 years of fun 10/3/09 . chapter 1
pls continue this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter
| Renrin Taiho 9/24/09 . chapter 1
Aww, come on! It's so short! I want, no..NEED more. Poor Hazumu. This is really funny. Please write more. Renrin
| Kyuun 6/28/09 . chapter 1
I'm curious about this story... There's not much to this intro though but I can't wait for more! I've waited for ever for a KashiMashi story!X3