 Chaos Omega Nova I 1/13/03 . chapter 17Well the end had me all confused and stuff, but hey, very well done.
Please read my recent fic and review it please.
Chaos Omega Nova I |
 BobR 1/5/03 . chapter 17Interesting ending, you managed to get all the characters into it too, nice job. I can't wait until your next foray into the Tenchiverse. |
 Priest 1/4/03 . chapter 17A fitting end. and i look forward to the next story. Ja-ne (_) |
 La Shy Girl 12/30/02 . chapter 17 Well its been a long time but it was worth it and I'mm glad that ou finally updated. Well great story and hurry in writing the other one. |
 Some.Random.Person.Here 12/29/02 . chapter 17Oh wow it's the end now, I can't believe it. (And no I'm not being sarcastic). Anyway good story! Look forward to any of your upcoming works! |
 Bexi 12/13/02 . chapter 16Too many names for my little brain to handle, overload!
This is complicated, but if you figure the family tree out, it's quite simple ... i did that once with my best mate ... that was funny!
Hope you upload soon, and i have a request ... please put speacing in between paragraphs and quotations, it really strains the ol' eyes!
It's the perfect pairing and everyone's satisfied ... Tenchi has both Ryoko and Ayeka! Prefect ...
The Kamidake and Nagi pairing is different ... good but differnt. I'm just glad you haven't portrayed him as dim wit who knows nothing (I've seen fic like that! I hate when they don't get his chracter right!)
Sighing out...
-Bexi- |
 Priest 11/22/02 . chapter 16Good job with this one. keep up the good work. Ja-ne (_) |
 Chaos Omega Nova I 11/21/02 . chapter 16AHHHHHHHHHH, please post chapter 17 soon! I'm on one hell of a cliff hanger!
Oh and please read my fic.
Chaos Omega Nova I |
 BobR 11/19/02 . chapter 16Told you I'd get around to reviewing this. Like I said in my review of your previous chapter, very complex relationships in this; gives me a headache. You see Seto as evil? If that's right then boy have I read her wrong. Manipulative and crafty, yes, but not evil.
I anxiously await your next one. |
 poetryfreak 11/12/02 . chapter 16 sorry, i'm too lazy to sign in. your story's cool, but since i just now found it, it took three days to read. not bad! it's a good story with a good plot, blah blah blah. cant wait for the next one |
 Jibril Mudo 10/25/02 . chapter 15Pretty good I think. Perhaps some more interaction between Tenchi and his grandmother Tokimi. Possibly a little to many characters from all the TM series, but that's cool. Nice, lighthearted fic. |
 BobR 9/21/02 . chapter 15Hmm. Interesting. The relationships you've established with all the characters are quite complex, I don't know how you're keeping track of all of them. I look forward to the homecoming in your next chapter. |
 Priest 9/20/02 . chapter 15Good work on this chapter, I can hardly wait for the next. Ja-ne (_) |
 Al Kristopher 9/16/02 . chapter 15 This is becoming WAAAAAAAAAAAY too confusing for me. With so many peoples and names, some of whom I have never even heard of, it's a wonder my sanity still remains. I might want to see a complete Jurai/Masaki family tree when all is said and done... and did somebody say "Godfather"? |
 metallica-wedo 9/16/02 . chapter 15I don't remember if I've reviewed your story yet or not, and I'm not going to check, but I've kept up with it and I think it is great. The only thing I've noticed is that sometimes you're redundant and aren't using commas when you should, but there aren'y any spelling errors. Anyways, great story and keep it up! |