Meh

ive noticed you like Roxas alot...

Well i now have to announce you are my favourite write for KH

RoxSor is my favourite pairing and you rock!

seriously

except for some things i really like your writting style

btw/ i haven1t read this one...but i`ll try :P

I love-th the story. :D
Nice bonus chapter.
x3

I've been on a nonstop reading rush.
Yeah the story seemed to have its down falls, but in all it was a great story. The smexy sex scene betweens everyone. Sora almost sounded like a **.

Riku
Axel
THEN Roxas

Sora you litte ** hound~ xD

Sorry Just had to say that! XD!
Loved it, thanks for a good read. :3

omg i know it too me forever to read this
but i have to say THIA IS THE BEST STOYR EVER!
i live it
the batle the romance
the sex ;)

it was awsome
i felt like i was readin a real book
that i bought at k-mart or something
i love it
it was great
can't wait to read more of your storys!

Deva:>.>
<..> please email her some cokies please so my ears wont suffer
Deva: -cries louder- chocolate chip cokies...-does puppy face- pwetty please?
Deva~
Other Deva~
P.S. U really did enjoy your story immensely and if you ever need a beta n.~ just ak me newho later~ and YAOI KICKS **!...(ahem) or rather it erm nvm lets not go there... ;>.>

YES.
Finally, a fanfic that makes Kairi a good guy.

I was getting tired of the Kairi-bashing.

Anyways, I absolutely love this story, you have a great imagination. && I'll most likely read your others too,
good job.

~Pillule

:D
YAY SMUT!!

-dEmOn-

I loved it!^^
I hope that you'll soon hit off on your re:writing plans. I'm sure it's going to be great and all. And I still can't help but writing reviews to you; you deserved every last bit of appreciation you'll get! (Sorry if something is misspelled, but then again you hopefully know why.)
It was a really good sex-scene in this at the end and I can't help but feel empty, knowing that this is the end-end. And probably no more extra chapters, but I'll get to read it again when you put up the rewritten chapter. And I'll be going to my next lesson soon (so now you know what I do on my spare time in school. Best part about reading it? No picture and no need to shame if anyone is coming up to me and sees it. I won't get any "Hey PD! What are you- OMGWTHBBQ is THAT!?!" so I'm safe..)
Well, until next time!^^
-PD

AW!
I read the end an *Confetti* Hoorah! Happy ending!
Good job! Verriy Veriy Pleasing indeed.
>:D
It wasn't corny either...much.
X)
Very happy with you!

-dEmOn-

*Twitch*
Tidus doesn't exist??!
I don't get it! I saw him in KH1!!
0~0
X)
Sorry, I suck at making jokes...
But VERY intense, will read the next!!

-dEmOn-

OMG! I loved your story. But I wish there was a ending scene between Sora and Roxas since the only one in chapter 1 was actually a dream. Epilogue PLEASE! XD

I'll stay fait to you and try to struggle myself to read everything! But consider that it's after all, you then I think that I'll manages just fine!^^
No, it's just that I've got problem to read the same think twice if it haven't been a halfyear in between so that I can forget the text in the meantime. No hard feelings, but I WILL re:read everything! *serious face on!*
And then we'll se what's happen then.
So until then!^^
-PD

It was great and a bit of AkuDem I see. Lovely end for both Tidus (that sucker) and Xemnas (he's quite scaring, if I get to say it myself, but then again, ain't I that too?) so I'm glad that he's dead. (So horrible, but yet so true..)
So now you can focus more on Consolation Prize! Yay! But SD has finally growed up now and look, it's just so pretty. Just like it's mom! (Though I have no idea how you looks like, but just act along, okay?) So what are you SD going to do now? And what happened to Zexion, Olette, Hayner and Pence? And moste of all, school? I mean, he's right now a drop out and he that had such a lovely school life. And what about Seifer and his proposal? Though it was nasty it was quite funny.. I guess he never did get a show on the Thursday. Poor Seifer, now he'll never get to see it ever again.. But I'm happy for Roxas (and Tai) and his (/theirs) happy ever after with Sora (but most Tai, marvelous is all I can say). I'm feeling so happy but yet so sad thta this is a no more. I'll probably never get to see SD again! *Sob* "SD, never forget your auntie Phoenix, Okay?! If you do I'll haunt you in the afterlife (if I ever can do that, I mean) just so you know!" Yes, auntie is insane, and she knows about it alright, so no problems! I hope that I've not given you a scare and that you'll ban me from all your stories, but you can't take me too serious because if I was /too/ serious (which I ain't) then I wouldn't have this much fun. Just yesterday I had the most interesting experiense with J-rock videos that one in my Japanese class showed me on her iPod. It was so fun and she even showed me a bit of "yaoi" in it. Talk about fan service alright!^^ Oh and after it me and my sister walked back to the school (we have the Japanese in a differrent school, so we have to take a bus to the different schools) we spoked to one of our friends and she told us all about what she had done under her weekend; make out with three different girl which to was actually dateing each others. Oh, and our friend are bisexual so she thought that it was fun.. And I also asked my friend that live about 250 km away from me if we could pretend to date so if my stalker would ask me out I can say that I'm taken. I think that she answered yes on it.. But atleast she asked me if we could have a fake proopsal as well. And I'm all deal for it. And all this happened in a mere three days! Wow.. Oh and we finally got our power back! Yesterday and we were just so happy, but then we descovered a new problem; no Internet.. So we must continue to write in our school, so "yay".. (= =;)
But I've gotten some insperation to write on a story that I've been post-poning. I'm trying to write a story-fromation on Allergies and I shocked myself of how much I could fill out on mere 8 words. Like three lines on one word.. So yeah.. It'll be alot more later..
But I'll better stop writing now so i don't kill you iin my word overload.. It would be unfortune, now wouldn't it? Oh and my sister asked me if I could be some kind of pass-way between you and my lovely sis. So whatever you want to write to my sister, just write to me and I'll transfer it over to her, okay?
Anyway, good lucka nd I'll see you soon in the world we call fan fiction!^^
Until then!^^
-PD

uh can you notify the Chapters where you have major changes so that we re-read them..

*cry* a prologue would have been nice too!

Awesome story by the way. Had me skeptical in the beginning, but it grew on me and had me literally hanging off my chair. Loved it!