nice chapter...good to see the characters from the original story. Can't wait for the next chapter. peace out

very intersting story you have here...i like it a lot and can't wait for chapter 4.

Nice chappie, although there are a few grammar errors and a few typos, but anyway, nice update.

Hmm.. I'm interested in this one, but it's funny to get in jail when you're only 13.. :), anyway, nice start.