Those stories are cute. Keep going.

Well, that wasn't quite the normal way of meeting the family, but it works XD A better way perhaps. It sure made it more interesting. I'm glad some other people are noticing the likeness of the pair :) -WV

Very sweet.

Awesome. I still really like this reincarnation idea. It makes for interesting fics. I look forward to seeing more in this arc if you plan on them :) (Oh, and I applaud you at being so far in NaNo. That's really impressive. You're on the downhill slide now.) -WV

I like the idea of reincarnation. They deserve that much at least. Poor characters that don't get their happy endings. Why does he torture his own characters so much? Gah. I guess that's what we're here for. Wonderful as always :) -WV

Box-hime. I think I was laughing so hard I cried. XD

Aww, that was sweet. It could indeed be reincarnation. I liked the way you set this one up. In the future, but still keeping with the theme. It was very cool. How you write so much is beyond me XD -WV

Disease things are always scary. I read a SasuSaku fic about that once. It was nailbiting. Tsunade will figure something out. For a second there, I thought you were hinting at Jiraiya having the illness, as he said nothing for her to worry about. That would be sad :( Great fic tho. -WV

I find this interesting. You said this was AU, so something like this didn't happen right? I think it's a sweet plotline to go on if it didn't. Stupid Orochimaru. He ruins everything. -WV

Aw! This chapter is so cute! I can't wait for more! Well done!

Wow. Great metaphor there with the cards. That was awesome. Very fitting too, with her habits. Why can't I make short and sweet fics that still have a meaning to them? XD XD Everything I do gets way out of hand. Very awesome chapter. -WV

ah, this is just so cute!

I can picture Jiraiya cooking for some reason. I've no idea why. I think that would be funny. The way she feels seems so real. That's probably how I'm going to be when I graduate. I have no idea where I'm going to go. I don't have a Jiraiya close by, unfortunately. Tsunade is one lucky person. And wow, half-way done already? It seems like you just started. -WV

Aw! This chapter is cute! I really liked it!

Aww, how sweet. I remember blood drives we had at our school. I wasn't old enough the first time though, and I had been out of the country too recent for the next one. I can't imagine donating is any fun when you don't like blood. What Jiraiya did was awesome though. I liked it very much. -WV