It's nice that she can still visit. I think it's awesome that the girls get spoiled. Shunsui and Jushiro especially seem like the type to spoil kids. The Toshiro bit was cool too. I think he probably would have a soft spot for kids. I like all the hints to other pairs you include too. I think that makes the universe it's set in more complete. I love betting pools :) -WV

These are getting more and more sugar-coated, aren't they? Might I inquire as to why it has become a continuous story.

That was a very intereting prompt. A great fic though. I laughed. It looked like it was a lot of fun. I think that's a great way for academy students to spend some time. Plus, those two get babysitting for free XD XD. A great message in here too, about why people do the things they do and about the world not being black and white. One of my favs so far for sure. -WV

Hilarious! Especially using the vitamins as ammunition. XD

Hehe, poor Shunsui. ^_^

Oh, so unbelievably cute!

Plus, I was picturing Gin hanging around in his real-world house in like jeans and an apron and it made me laugh hysterically. Probably not what you had in mind, but eh, what can ya do.

Ran's kids sound adorable - looking forward to hearing about Nanao's.

XD XD Nice one. That's hilarious. I can see him fainting like that. I would laugh. Gin prodding him with his toe is awesome too. Very cool. -WV

So Sweet! Pity the manga is heading in a direction that would translate to Gin and Rangiku having anything but a happy ending.

Well that's an interesting theme. I can totally understand how she might not be listening though. Even if she had other stuff on her mind. I don't find droning voices that easy to listen to. Chapter still made me aww. It's nice to see happy endings. Or rather, beginnings, for these two at this point. They don't have much hope for it otherwise. -WV

Sweet as always! ^_^

I'm in serious love with this fic - and this chapter was just full of fluffy goodness :) Thank you!

So excited to see what's going to happen next, your plot is just wonderful, and I can't wait until you have another one up!

Thanks for sharing, and very good job!

i like this one!

Update soon!
DarkC

starving musician fund?! i like that! ever-so-practical nanao! i bet the only reason why she started that for gin was because she's already done that for shunsui!

cute chappie!
DarkC

Aww, that was touching. Exile seems like what they do with many people these days. I think it's fitting. I agree with not going to Karakura too. Everyone is there D: I like reading these fics so I can get a feel for characterization. I have a Gin/Ran in the works, and it's a bit challenging to write them. You provide a good example. -WV

You're half-ways! Congratulations.