Couldn't find my password and stuff for weeks, but here we go, I've been wanting to review this story since I read it!

It's WONDERFULLY written, with great new character(s) and pairings and I can only wait till the next chapter!
Great job! ^_^

Hey this is interesting I like it. Zhu Xu is far from an idiot historically.

I like the way you wrote the fic, and the friendship between Zhang He and Xu Zhu came off as something that was natural.


I have one thing to point out though: it should be Zhang LIAO, not Liang. :D

Oh I AM looking forward to the next chapter!

And I think this is one of the few fics with Zhu in it! Well done! (Not that I really like the character to be honest! But I do love some variety!)

Very nice first chapter. And I like how you show the perspectives of different characters...it keeps you wondering what's going on and what's going to happen next.
Wei Yan: "No shit"...haha I love it :P