Quite good! A very interesting and refreshing story. I don't think I have read a story like this yet on . Technically well done and the story was fascinating. I know this was written some time ago, but I wanted to let you know how much I liked it. Thank you for sharing.

Convoluted at times with some spelling and grammatical errors, but overall an interesting story if only beacuse there are few Gendo Ikari stories out there.