nice story the suspense with the feelings they have is killing me!

Hey! Come back here! I want to see what happens next!
Update soon please.
Thank you!

From,
A Fan.

ive really enjoyed reading this plz do more

Make another chapter already!

i enjoyed the story so far i hope you update soon

I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens! PLEASE UPDATE! I DON'T CARE IF IT'S SHORT, I'M DIEING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!

You evil cliff hangerer! xD I'm so glad I caught this story later on ;)

I do love Selene's adorable protective streak when it comes to Darla! Pardon me for saying this, but that was a stupid move indeed! Leaving her rifle outside while being in unfamiliar, dangerous territory...Yep, humans can be incredibly scatter brained at times. I'm glad this is not a cliffy for me hehehehe

Pity I can't make a suggestion since you must have already made a decision...

Haha, my previous review was dead on...pack bonding lol

You know from your descriptions they are starting to sound really cute and that's weird because I can't stand reptiles xD

Pack bonding lol

If only they didn't use her as bait though...

This is a very interesting idea, Sarah! We all have wondered what it would be like living with a pack of wild animals at least once. For me, it was wolves! I love the mutts xD I really like your main character, Darla as well. I would have probably acted in the same stupid, altruistic way if I were in her place lol

Great starting chapter

I really love your story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

You have to keep writing I love all three movies and this just made my day thanks _

EPIC! I LOVE how you combined your story with Jurassic Park 3. Which I might say is one of the greatest dino movies that ever exsisted!

love your story hope you finish with a opening for a seqeul since i love these types of storys with raptors and they are really rare (any decent story with a raptor in it is rare)