I luffed it.
But one thing kinda creeped me out.

She's what? twenty-something?

He's what? three or four times that?

...either way, it was awesome x3

I created an account just to review this story. At first it was very appealing to me (keep in mind I'm critiquing now criticizng), but after awhile it seemed to me the whole story was notin place with Saw. Amanda does not call John "Jigsaw" like she does in your story, and Adam would NOT be calling Jigsaw "sir. At first sight of John, Adam would probably screaming "motherf*cker!" and attacking him. Jigsaw WOULD NEVER consend to an unwinnable trap like at the end, and Adam wouldn't be going to a carnival a few days after he got shot in the shoulder, and chained to a pipe for 24+ hours. You have great writing/grammar/spelling skills, but this story did not meet the Saw standards, nor did it portray the characters like it did in the movie series. Thank you. I'll read some of your other stories and get back to you. :)

HAPPE!

Good! Another chapter soon?

AWESOME.

Good!

Awesome!

Interesting story, fluent and easy to read
in other words, I like
it's kinda short though, add more soon pls :D