 IlovetowriteSMP 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Loved these lines:
wake up just in time to hear his best friend's voice. It was the only thing keeping him here. It was the only thing keeping him anywhere
Forgetting someone always started with one night, and what if this was the night Vince chose to forget him?
Neither of them said a word as Vince settled against Eric's back and found his hands beneath the dark tangle of the sheets. Settling their entwined fingers on his hip, Eric finally allowed sleep to fully overtake him.
In the next line you say his sleep was fitful, but I think you mean peaceful.
This was a sweet moment:Eric lifted Vince's hand and placed a soft kiss on the inside of his wrist,
Love the description of the first time he said I love you and the intensity of the moment during the second time.
This is a great phrase:
as Vincent's heart finally jumped alive
I barely watch this show but this was the best male slash ever. This couple is so romantic. They are connected at the soul.
You did a fantastic job on this. Some of your best work ever. |