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DaltonSwiu130
2009-12-03 . chapter 1
I think that it is good that E and Vince have each other. Its good so that if something were to happen with Vinnie's career they stil have eachother's friendship to make them happy. Entourage is an amaing show and it is good to hear what other people think about the how
NeitherAngelNorDevil
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Amazing! I truly loved it! You portraed Vincent and E's personalities perfectly (at least I think so ;P)

There was so many intese moments between the two and I loved the phone calls between them. Especially how Vince doesn't want E to leave him and yeah >.>;;

I loved it! Thank-you so much for writting it =D xx
Muffintine
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Wow. Just, wow. This was so amazing.

Thank you.
IlovetowriteSMP
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Loved these lines:
wake up just in time to hear his best friend's voice. It was the only thing keeping him here. It was the only thing keeping him anywhere

Forgetting someone always started with one night, and what if this was the night Vince chose to forget him?

Neither of them said a word as Vince settled against Eric's back and found his hands beneath the dark tangle of the sheets. Settling their entwined fingers on his hip, Eric finally allowed sleep to fully overtake him.

In the next line you say his sleep was fitful, but I think you mean peaceful.

This was a sweet moment:Eric lifted Vince's hand and placed a soft kiss on the inside of his wrist,

Love the description of the first time he said I love you and the intensity of the moment during the second time.

This is a great phrase:
as Vincent's heart finally jumped alive

I barely watch this show but this was the best male slash ever. This couple is so romantic. They are connected at the soul.

You did a fantastic job on this. Some of your best work ever.
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