Amazing!

Very moving...

Darn it. Now, I too, feel like some infestimaly small amount of myself is trapped in some cold Azkaban cell along with a (hermsexyherm) madman...waiting for eternity to go by. A well written ficlet.

A very dramatic and a bit sad ending. But great story never the less. :)

Wow. Very realistic, frightening. It sounds like a young boy visiting his Nazi grandfather, but in a place that resembles more a prison of the Inquisition, with all the horror of both situations. No fluff and no frills. Lucius Malfoy is Lucius Malfoy.

and Scorpius is... innocent.

'What he had done wasn't right, but neither was this' summons it up.

Good ending. We are left with a lot of questions concerning the wizarding world.

This was amazing...

This is a great story!

Your version of Azkaban reminds me of the Bastille... the same creepy, dominating architecture.

The first moment when Scorpius is pushed into the cell and thinks he's going to be there forever: quite accurate-I've heard that reaction reported by visitors to real-life prisons (something about hearing all those doors clanging shut behind you).

Technical notes: the piece is POV Scorpius all the way up to the line: “Merlin,” he hissed. “Has that much time really passed?” Then it switches to POV Lucius, then back to POV Scorpius. The information about Draco's visit would probably be best communicated by Lucius somewhere in the conversation, rather than remaining inside his head (it makes a break in the continuity of POV).

Otherwise a superb little piece... very creepy in the suggestion of how _little_ has changed in the wizarding world. Even without Dementors, Azkaban is a horrible place.

Hmm, I quite enjoyed this. Wonderfully realistic.

Good story

Very interesting fic; I wish there were more like this.

-P.G.

This story was deep and extremely well written. It gave light to not only Scorpius's character, but his grandfather as well. It wasn't overly 'fluffy' or out of character for either of them and very well paced. Your expressions and descriptions really painted a picture and, as sad as the story was, it was good.

Good job!

-UndeniablyMe ;)

Hotdamn, 400 stories?

Anyway, this was good. I liked Scorpius, he's awesome! :P

Would have been nice to have more diaglouge though.

Very intense my dear. I felt as though I was there. Good to know that Scorpius doesn't feel the same way as his family. That he doesn't care about pureblood and whatnot. But it's intense for sure. Seeing your grandfather like that? *Shudders* But good writing doll.

Congrats on number 400!