Awesome one-shot! I loved the style you wrote it in, and your characterization was flawless. It reminds me of Francesca Lia Block's work; you give us very little detail - just enough to leave our imaginations wandering. Very few people can write this way and write it WELL so that it actually leads us along as readers. You also did something very nice with interweaving every canon instance between Yami and Bakura that I could think of into your own version of what happened behind the scenes of the show. It was brilliant, and I loved reading it.

Thank you so much for sharing!

;Shaku

Sorry, too lazy to log in.

Your fic was awesome! I seriously thought this was going to end badly but it didn't and I love this story more because of it!

Awesome job （）I hope you write more of this pairing -

HOLY RA!

This was very heartfelt. It brought a tear to my eye. I could see Atemu saying something like this.

I've read stuff really descriptive before but nothing this good that's casteshipping.

Me has question about manga.

Didn't you find it stupid, that the priests are fighting with their ka spirits and puting their lives at risk, when all atem does is get his butt of the shiny gold throne and push Thief king out of the way?

I sure did.

I loved this! keep it up! Who wouldn't fall for the Thief King? He's too damn gorgeous and exotic!

I liked how you managed it, I can so see this happening and the ending was so bittersweet...thanks for writing :)

How beautiful, and so true.. Really worthy of a rewiew, you should make more fics of this pairing. P.s, I couldnt log in but my pen name is same.

Oh my god. This was so depressing to read, but...it hurt so good!

Yay! Darkshipping! /giggles/

Ha, aside from Puzzleshipping, I have this weird Darkshipping fetish. Don't ask. xD

Soo sweet! x3 I love it!

Darkie

I think this story deserves more reviews. It was so heart warming and beautiful, breathtaking and a little heartbreaking at the same time. The last lines are perfection, and you've really captured the essence of the relationship. I loved it.

goregous

/legasp/ How is it I haven't found this profile before now? Haha, but I did! /giggles/ Wait... Does this mean I'm stalking you now? Ahahahahaha! :P Aw, cute story, very fluffy and sweet! Awesome! D

i loved it

That was adorable!

That was, uh...

...Special. And not in that way, either, in the special way.

I'm totally not using that word correctly. Still, that was ultra-sweet. D'aw...

Anyway, errors:

"...that first time in Duellist Kingdom"

It's 'Duelist'.

"...Sennen eye..."

The 'eye' needs to be capatilized.

Hurray!