ooohhh this is going to be good please update i like to see what happens next

I also like the idea of Hinata being a Yuki-Onna, and just for sh*ts and giggles, you can have Hinata pop out of random places just like Mizore.

I have always liked Narut/Anko pairing, they have so much in common, but there is also anther Anko pairing i have liked. Anko/Iruka is and probably always will be one of my fave's cause Iruka deserves some lovin too and having Anko as a girlfriend would probably be good for him (he was kinda up tight like he needed to get laid).

Of course my opinions mean didly-squat but its an idea.

Interesting story. I enjoy it so far but there are a few remarks I wish to make about the Demons and the harem itself.

Sakura, Hinata, Ino, Temari, Tenten, Tayuya, all awesome girls with great potential for a harem due to their inherent personality and the interaction that can occur between the girls. I have no issue with any of these girls being implicated in Naruto's harem. Most of the other girls bug me however.

In the time of shippuden, Moegi is 10 years old, not 12. Same age as Hinabi, and just like Hinabi a romance or sexual relationship with Naruto is inappropriate, a character like Yukari Sendo is one thing(a 13 year old genius who has a mind well beyond her years) but a 10 year old girl who probably hasn't even started her menstrual cycle is out of bounds, and personally demon aging doesn't make it any better.

The older women also push it for me, yes I understand the concept of MILF, however I don't find the notion of older women flocking to a guy half their age believable, there is also the point that older women can cause an unbalance when put beside all these younger girls and as it is the Kyuubi is already an 'older woman' I don't think the story needs any more.

On to the demon bits. It makes no amount of measurable sense to me that the girls would become demons based on anything other than Kyuubi. Seriously I have never heard of a Kyuubi creating a Yuki'onna, or sucubus, it's just weird. That said the concept of giving Naruto's mates demon energy is greatly appealing. But i thinkg it would have a better balance of the change becomes refined and functions more like Naruto's initial release state, save for demon markings similar to youkai like Sesshoumaru from Inuyasha. and it's workable because Sakura could undergo some modifications from the Kyuubi to balance herself out and that transitions onto the other girls so they don't throw away their original character and focus to much on demon abilities but instead use demon abilities to augment their own natural abilities.

Well there is other stuff i could say but i don't wish to waste your time so message me if you're interested.

it was great and u should add tenten an anko

Well its been awhile. When are you going to get back to add to this story. One of the better ones that I have read. I hate to start a story then the person writing give up on it and the peole that are following it.

Tayuya I suggest Oni because she doesn't really seem to lean towards succubus. Ten-Ten yo could make into a Knight demon or an weapon maker demon As for the demon character knight I ask that you look into disgaea to see what I mean you might also decide to use some of those for other girls :)

I say add Tenten and Temari and HELL NO to Tayuya well that if you actually continue with this story and I hope you do

Nice going, but hope you add in Hana as well...she's just too good.

Please write more! It's an awesome story!

Good story.

Could you add: Sasame, Fu(Seven Tailed Jinchuriki), Karui, Mei, Samui, Karin, Kurotsuchi, Yugito, Shizune, Ayame to the Harem?

Please update soon.

Mei Terumii sounds like a good choice for an addition to the harem...I'd like to see what happens when Kirigakure withdraws its business from Konoha when she leaves with Naruto and his friends and harem...also, I find it funny how she behaves up to the "Shut up or I'll kill you" line.

I believe Isaribi should be a mermaid, and there should only be three female kitsune(kyuubi, Sakura, and Moegi). Also for Tayuya's yokai(monster) form should be a succubus or a siren(due to the fact she uses sound) (rosariovampire kind). Ten Ten as a Jorogumo (prostitute spider) might be interesting, but I see her more as an oni(ogre). If you're going to add Tsume to the harem make her a werewolf(I can see this happening). I think Tsunade should definitely be in the harem and have kids as a vampire(rosariovampire style). This creates a irony in that Tsunade's best nourishment is something she fears. Naruto's already a kitsune. If you add Ino then a succubus or a nekomata(cat demon) would work well. Anko could also be a Lamia because of the whole half snake half woman thing. The Uzumaki clan being reborn as yokai or hanyous is a interesting idea.

I believe Isaribi should be a mermaid, and there should only be three female kitsune(kyuubi, Sakura, and Moegi). Also for Tayuya's yokai(monster) form should be a succubus (rosariovampire kind). Ten Ten as a Jurogumo (prostitute spider) might be interesting, but I see her more as an oni(ogre). If you're going to add Tsume to the harem make her a werewolf(I can see this happening). I think Tsunade should definitely be in the harem and have kids as a vampire(rosariovampire style). This creates a irony in that Tsunade's best nourishment is something she fears. Naruto's already a kitsune. I'll finish this by saying the Uzumaki clan is changing from fuuinjutsu masters to yokai. Interesting stuff so far.

Once again, I will ask that you consider the possibility of Haku being revived as a Yuki-onna through a transformation similar to Sakura's She would have gladly given up her life as a ninja to become a medic in Wave, as she never really liked killing, and I doubt anyone in Wave would recognize her. On the note of Wave and Snow, or other countries, why not have Naruto learn the Hirashin? Problem solved. I rarely see anyone give him this jutsu, relegating it to a Fourth-only technique. Everyone gives him Rasengan, but the Hirashin? Nooooo. Finally, what about Tsunami? I can definitely see her and Naruto together, and it would be funny to see Naruto as Inari's older brother/father. The boy is named after some Japanese legend connected to foxes, if I remember correctly.