You're right, it is damn good. and it does fit very well. Kinda angsty, but thats the way i like it! Very good, keep up the great work.

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yo! thanx for reviewing my fic... i wrote a poem for team extreme too! review? hehe... anyways, i liked your poem too! its so well written..

Very deep, it was interesting to read a poem that obviously has taken much time into making, it definetly shines in the poem. great work