I really like this story! Its very interesting... In a good way of course. I do wonder what is going to happen in this interesting story. I guess I will have to wait to find out :D Sorry these are small I normally like to write more on reviews...

That was very good! Again I'm very impressed with your writing. That purple goo stuff not very pleasant. It was kinda cool it was as if he turned into a shiny pokemon very interesting. This could become a very good story! Now I'm ready to read and review the next chapter! :)