I really have to compliment you on the brilliant job you did on this :)
You wrote Mia and Diego perfectly, with all their nuances intact, and capturing the chemistry between them perfectly.
I loved how your story progressed, one scene after another, capturing snapshots of their time together while developing their relationship. It was just beautiful, and even that's an understatement for how good this story was.
On top of all that, I think you wrote the mood exquisitely, and throughout the whole thing, there was this strong emotional pull. I wanted to cry at the end, but I love how you gave Mia that strength instead of the falling-apart-Mia that most people write following Diego's poisoning.

All in all, absolutely wonderful writing! I do hope to see more from you :)

This story made me feel like crying. I like how slow the development went between them and afterwards the way it hit you that it was all over was so sad. I loved it. ^_^

That was beautifully written. I nearly cried at the end. The way you developed Mia and Diego's relationship was fantastic and the story as a whole flowed very well. Really, this was a great piece of work :)

Oh my gosh, this story seriously made me cry. Such a beautiful job writing. I have to admit, Diego is one of my favorite characters from the series. Also, Mia/Diego is the cutest pairing in the entire game! Awesome job, you should write more.