Aw...poor Onyx. Oh well! What can ya do?
I really liked this...not the happy ending I was expecting.
Nice analogies! XD

I did like Onyx in the game. Even though he was obsessive stalker like, he was sort of cool. And surprisingly easy to beat both times I had to fight him, unlike the stupid dragon in his realm.

I liked this because it was realistic. I'm not so into depressing things, but this was good. It showed more to him, and could really be true. A wonderful piece for the fandom.

I really loved it!
It was so... aw, I don't know how to describe it.
Frankly I'm currently drawing a fanart of Onyx and Gwendolyn that looks exactly like you described how Onyx held Gwendolyn in his arms...
That's why I love this, too!

Loved it! I'm a fan of Onyx as well which is probably why I loved this story so much! ^^ Great idea too! I never thought about Onyx falling in love before Gwendolyn (maybe because he was so obsessed with her) but I really thought that was a good idea since he's immortal and all. I really liked how you started the story as well. ^^ I really enjoyed reading this.

Wow. I just did a false ending for fun, and when I saw this scene, I was on the verge of tears. Even though I thought it would be a whole lot more touching If it was Oswald instead of Onyx, it still is heart breaking.

Nice job. I really like it.