Really well done! You did Jean justice, really well written!

What a wonderful little one-shot. I particularly love how well you seem to go into the characters' mind and portray their thoughts and feelings. You seem to understand them so well. Well done!

Hey Ashley,

Great story. I love it. Can't wait for more. Email soon and take care.

Tasha

A touching piece, it showed all those emotions of uncertainty and fear and hope quite clearly. And the brief insight you gave into Jean and Magneto's relationship when she was still young was rather sweet. Good work!

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

really good