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Rainy Day In The Pines
2009-12-11 . chapter 9
Who the hell is it?! This is insanity! There are tons of impossiblities... two murderers...

Yikes!

Okay... thinking thinking... hmm... who could it be...
blueSKIES247
2009-11-29 . chapter 9
ek! this is so suspenseful! and there's two of them!

first thought: edward and bella, gotta be
second thought: emmett and rosalie, the new team, gotta be
third thought: no, edward and bella

or is it eric and jasper? wait...who else is there? who is #5?
MakaylaLCullen
2009-11-07 . chapter 9
omg i am so scared!

im home alone right now and its really dark out!
ForeverIndebted
2009-11-06 . chapter 9
Mess with my head? Well...more than that. Far more than that.
Anyway, because of this, I'm done guessing. My brain can't take it.
I seriously hope you're considering becoming an author because all of your writing is amazing.
KrittleTwilighted
2009-11-01 . chapter 9
I wasn't thinking there where two killers. That would mean that one of them aren't one of the 13 kids? B/c there are 13 kids and in one of the chapters the killer said 2 down and 10 to go. I was thinking it was between Jasper, Bella, and Edward. Jasper b/c he was the one in the prologue calling 911. Edward and Bella b/c they just can't die. LoL...I know I'm bias.
Jessi 3B's
2009-11-01 . chapter 9
I have never been this confused. Mann mysteries so aren't my thing. So, you should update real fast so I can find out who the **' killer is, cause I'm to retarded to figure it out myself.
Loves,
Jessi.
Blawwmkw
2009-11-01 . chapter 9
Great, so there's TWO killers? I really don't know...And Lauren was so close to getting out of there, too. So are the killers the people in the picture? Gah...Edward...and...someone? Rosalie? Bella? Jasper, if you REALLY wanted us confused? Jasper is just so cool though...I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter!
123onetwothree
2009-11-01 . chapter 9
Okay...who's left?
Edward, Bella, Jasper, Eric, and Emmett...and Rosalie.
6 people remaining...and 2 are working together...is there an extra person?

Oh well. Death had its list, and her name must’ve got moved up while he wasn’t looking. Never the less, he did not smile as he pulled out the camera phone, once again entering the picture menu.
* That kind of sounds like...Jasper maybe...

I don't think Emmett is the killer...he's too sweet...and maybe I can cross Eric off the list too since he's not a major character in the books and he's the only non-important one left... unless he's angry because no one ever paid attention to him. ;D

Bella. Bella? She overheard Mike?

So my killer for the chapter is...Bella? I need the next chapter. ;D

~Melissa
HeswamtoFrance
2009-11-01 . chapter 9
This is great. I am loving the deaths. You should update as soon as real life will let you again. Please. :)
George
Stronger than you since 1915
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
curse you and your brilliant story. haha, update when you can!
SwiftDragonfly
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
Meh, I like the idea that everyone's killing everyone behind each other's backs. But, alas, the constant 'let the bodies hit the floor' and the fact that both the killers knew how many have died so far means otherwise.

Wait... what? Am I miscounting or are there only six characters left? "still got five left to go" So unless one of them is going to kill himself, then one of the two killers has to be an outsider. I'm guessing the person in the painting looked a lot like the man that killed someone's family member? Like, oh, Edward or Jasper's? (I think I already guessed that, but oh well.)

Bella, Edward, and Rosalie are my guesses at the moment. Maybe next chapter I'll get out all my notes and figure out who it is. ^^
theperson13
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
COOL! i still think james, larount and/or victoria are the killers...bbut, we'll see! wow! two more dead! everyone is so stupid! whenever there's a noise or something, of COURSE they go alone or follow it n say the obvious, 'anyone there?' LIKE THEY'LL ANSWER!! lol! luvin the story! update soon and HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

tip: stay far from props on benches next to doors. they r usually an actor trying to scare someone. to make sure, throw a rock at it or poke it with a stick or something!
iambetterthanyou007
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
I betcha that Edward and Bella are working together. And i also think someone ELSE is killing people without the PHANTOM noticing.
georgiasf
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
Great! Just what I need to get in the mood for the haunted house(s) I'm going to later. Update soon please!
bacmel79
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
Ah the killer has outside help. Well at least you didn't kill one of my suspects this time. I wish Mike would have just listened to Lauren about the picture because if he did I might know who the picture people reminded her of. I really want to know the answer to that too! Damn Mike you decerved to die for not listening!
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