  person1000 4/5/12 . chapter 5 did you name him after Akira Toriyama |
| person1000 4/5/12 . chapter 4 1 of the weirdest chapters i have ever read in a story |
| Oz 12/1/11 . chapter 1 Dude! U should get this story published or somethin,ive been lookin everywhere 4 somethin on son-Goku's mom,this one blew me away,its awesome! It would be an awesome 2 actually come 2 life |
| logan 10/2/10 . chapter 1 good |
 Shinigami4 1/2/02 . chapter 1goooooddd I love it ! :) |
| LAStone 12/27/01 . chapter 1 Interesting. I did like this story, but didn't Bardock have 2 sons? Or did he have Radish(sp) with an other female? Can't wait untill Mameko meets up with Goku again! |
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